Marianne Barnhardt
About the Image(s)
This photo is a classic after work gathering in a really cool place. Aperture f1.6 1/40s ISO 640 5.1mm
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6 comments posted
Stephen Levitas
(Group 32)
(Group 32)
This is so good, I have a lot to say about it.
1. You shot from behind the bar and got a very informal and realistic picture of the people as they actually were.
2. Please shoot a whole series of such shots and gift them to the bar and offer to put them up at your expense, and just ask them to also display your name for credit.
3. Take more images like these and do a show at a local community arts gallery or public library.
4. If you have not been influenced by photographers like Robert Frank and Stephen Shore, it sure looks like it.
5. Keep taking photographs like this!   Posted: 11/04/2024 04:42:46
1. You shot from behind the bar and got a very informal and realistic picture of the people as they actually were.
2. Please shoot a whole series of such shots and gift them to the bar and offer to put them up at your expense, and just ask them to also display your name for credit.
3. Take more images like these and do a show at a local community arts gallery or public library.
4. If you have not been influenced by photographers like Robert Frank and Stephen Shore, it sure looks like it.
5. Keep taking photographs like this!   Posted: 11/04/2024 04:42:46
Lance Lewin
(Groups 83 & 87)
(Groups 83 & 87)
Hi Marianne! Nice work!!
Well, for the most part my comments echo Steve's ... indeed, this images is more inclined to produce a narrative from the viewer, and hope you follow this particular "Street Photography" path (as opposed to the often less-descriptive) "Street Scene" type compositions, into the future.
See also Gary Winogrand for additional inspiration.   Posted: 11/04/2024 12:38:45
Well, for the most part my comments echo Steve's ... indeed, this images is more inclined to produce a narrative from the viewer, and hope you follow this particular "Street Photography" path (as opposed to the often less-descriptive) "Street Scene" type compositions, into the future.
See also Gary Winogrand for additional inspiration.   Posted: 11/04/2024 12:38:45
Chuck Carstensen
Stephen and Lance said it all. Good eye and well done.
  Posted: 11/05/2024 18:38:28
  Posted: 11/05/2024 18:38:28
Lou McLove
Hi Marianne, very nice image and well done technically. I find it very busy but in this case that is not bad. There is so much to look at and yet my eye keeps going back to the main subject. Well done.   Posted: 11/07/2024 17:17:08
Michele Borgarelli
Marianne, I can't add more of what the other have already say. It is a great social photo and I believe the expression of the guy in the foreground is making the image special. The composition is great. It is a crowded space but all people have clear definition and there is no overlap of subjects.
Wonderful work
Michele   Posted: 11/07/2024 19:43:13
Wonderful work
Michele   Posted: 11/07/2024 19:43:13
Susan Robinson
"Now Mari's a street photographer
Who takes pics of people and sites
She went down to the local in search of some inspo
And her capture got several likes"
This is a really cool photo. As soon as I saw it, it reminded me of Piano Man... especially with the two men at the front.
I think you've captured the scene well, and the facial expressions are worth a thousand words. PLEASE put this in a competition sometime.
  Posted: 11/19/2024 23:53:02
Who takes pics of people and sites
She went down to the local in search of some inspo
And her capture got several likes"
This is a really cool photo. As soon as I saw it, it reminded me of Piano Man... especially with the two men at the front.
I think you've captured the scene well, and the facial expressions are worth a thousand words. PLEASE put this in a competition sometime.
  Posted: 11/19/2024 23:53:02