Brenda Fishbaugh, QPSA
About the Image(s)
On our trip to England and Italy in September, I photographed a lot of staircases with my cell phone. During my Milky Way workshop, Rick Sammon (well-known photo educator) recommended I do the whole Europe trip with my cell phone. So I did!
This is the Cecil Brewer Staircase in Heal's Furniture Store. It was built in 1810. Such a gorgeous staircase in a very unusual place!
I did a slight crop and used a NIK filter to darken the floor a bit, which I felt made it look it richer.
I'd like to enter it in Color. Any suggestions.
Apple iPhone 14 Pro handheld
ISO 400 6.86 mm. f/1.8. 1/50 sec
11 comments posted
Robert Schleif
Your editing, darkening the floor, removing some of the lamps, and the cropping all helped the image. It is a very interesting subject and a nice photograph of it. I have no suggestions.   Posted: 11/04/2024 00:15:42
Ed Ogle
I really like photographing spiral staircases. I've got a bunch of them. This is a really nice photo but I think the original is better than your edit because you broke it when you removed the lamp in the upper left. You still have the glow reflecting on the floor and the hand rail doesn't match. Here is the detail I am referring to.   Posted: 11/07/2024 15:12:15
Brenda Fishbaugh
Good catch! Back to the drawing board!   Posted: 11/07/2024 18:20:36
Jo-Ann Rolle
Brenda, beautiful capture of a unique staircase! The darkened floor adds richness, highlighting the elegance of the space. Ed's feedback on the lamp reflection is insightful-small tweaks could make an already stunning image even stronger!   Posted: 11/11/2024 17:22:18
Brenda Fishbaugh
I appreciate your enthusiasm Jo-Ann! I agree Ed found a big flaw. I'll wait to see if any other members have any suggestions before I redo it. Thanks!   Posted: 11/12/2024 02:11:51
Sunil Mehta
This is great. Ed's suggestion is important, and I have nothing else to add-it's a well-processed image.   Posted: 11/12/2024 02:01:58
Brenda Fishbaugh
Thanks, Sunil! I'll rework it as soon as everyone's advice comes in.   Posted: 11/12/2024 02:13:07
Jim Hagan
I like your revised image as it is. The blue light on the railings in the upper right corner doesn't bother me because I feel it is probably from some outside light source (such as a window) and not from the lamp that was removed. There is also a similar blue cast along the railing at the bottom of the image.   Posted: 11/12/2024 11:48:21
Brenda Fishbaugh
Thanks, Jim! I do think the blue ties in nicely with the blue floor at the center, but I did mess up the railing in the removal, and I'll see if I can be more tidy a second time around.
I don't think the blue shadow on the steps was from the light, but I'll take a deep look on fixing it.   Posted: 11/12/2024 21:11:52
I don't think the blue shadow on the steps was from the light, but I'll take a deep look on fixing it.   Posted: 11/12/2024 21:11:52
Pei-Fan Mu
It is a beautiful photo.Especially, I like the lines of the upwar curve of the stairs and the color of the yellow light.   Posted: 11/18/2024 02:29:13
Brenda Fishbaugh
Thanks so much, Pei-Fan! I'm going to see if I can do a better job on the items Ed pointed out. Hoping to post soon!   Posted: 11/20/2024 20:33:26