Maria Small  


Hungry Lesser Goldfinch by Maria Small

November 2024 - Hungry Lesser Goldfinch

November 2024 - Maria Small

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About the Image(s)

Last week I went back to one of my favorite places to photograph, the Huntington Botanical Gardens in Pasadena, southern California. I was in the Japanese Garden when I spotted a few Goldfinches feeding themselves with gusto among these lovely lavender blooms. There was one bird who caught my attention because he seemed oblivious to my presence, although I did keep good distance between them and him and me because I didn’t want to interrupt what looked like a much enjoyable meal for everyone.
I shot the image with my Sony A 7III and my 50-400 mm Tamron lens. My settings were Shutter Priority, f6.3, 1/500 s, ISO 400, at 368mm.
Since what I wanted to highlight was how focused and enthused the bird was on his
meal, my processing in Adobe Photoshop involved a big crop, then using Camera Raw I increased the exposure some, as well as contrast and vibrance. I also adjusted the background to lighten it so as to make the bird pop. I also used the Remove tool to get rid of or lighten either withered buds and leaves around the bird which I thought were too distracting.
I am brand new in the group and want to fast forward improving my skills in both photography and processing in Adobe Photoshop. Your feedback is most welcome.


8 comments posted




Bruce Benson   Bruce Benson
Hey Maria, welcome to the group 72 Nature Study Group. I am looking forward to seeing more of your images. I hope the members can give you many hints to improve your skills. My most important advice to get images that stand out is to must be there. Many things have to occur to make the right conditions for great images, including light, background, correct exposure and shutter speed, and most of all the subject has to be there doing something interesting at the time you are there with all these conditions met. Of course post processing can make up for some problems, but getting it correct in camera is the best, so just being there at the right time is for me the most important factor. I do spend a lot of time in my back yard setting up perches for the birds at my feeders so you do not have to travel far. Your image is Nice of the bird however there are to many distractions in the background. I Cropped it to a square to eliminate some of them, darkened the background and lightened the bird because your eye is naturally drawn to brighter areas. Of course you are the maker and the choice Is yours . Bruce Benson   Posted: 11/13/2024 01:33:32
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Dr Isaac Vaisman   Dr Isaac Vaisman
Maria, welcome to our group. I must agree with Bruce. I like what he did, but we have to learn how to wait and also walk the image to avoid the distracting background. Sometime is not possible. Yes, the bird is very involved in enjoying his snack   Posted: 11/14/2024 18:56:54



Chris Walsh   Chris Walsh
Hi Maria and welcome!

It sounds like you had quite the enjoyable shooting session - This bright fella sure does have a lot going for him. I like Bruce's input. I find the bird to be a bit crunchy but I'm not sure if it's from contrast or sharpening after such a large crop, or maybe some Topaz artifacting.

I like your color grading!   Posted: 11/15/2024 22:08:49



Maria Small   Maria Small
Thank you for the warm welcome, and thank you for your input. I agree with Bruce that the square crop, darkening the background and lightening the bird enhanced the image. Chris, I didn't use Topaz at all but, yes, I did increase the contrast of the bird after cropping. Thank you again and looking forward to learning with and from you all.   Posted: 11/15/2024 23:48:31



Barbara Gore   Barbara Gore
Hi Maria. Welcome to the group and I look forward to seeing your photos. For me, finding a clean background can sometimes be a challenge, but looking for the best angle with minimal distractions is worth it before hitting the shutter. Birds, unfortunately, don't always wait for us to compose our shots, which can result in a cluttered background that takes away from the subject. While a busy background may sometimes contribute to the story, for me it pulls my attention away from what really matters. In this photo, the bird's position and feeding gesture add interest but I feel there are too many competing elements. Bruce's suggestions are good.   Posted: 11/18/2024 18:51:12
Maria Small   Maria Small
Thank you for the warm welcome, Barbara, and your valuable suggestions. Am looking forward to leaning with and from all of you.   Posted: 11/19/2024 19:42:36



Adrian Binney   Adrian Binney
Maria - welcome to this group. I've here for 5 years and learnt so much as a bonus over enjoying a huge variety of Nature images on the way.

You did well developing your image - it looks well presented, although I would have lightened the shadows a tad more in your version. We all crave for clean backgrounds with some foliage to give a story for the bird/location, but when confronted with so much detail, Bruce is right to hone in to a smaller canvas - and then darkening the background/lightening bird makes 'him' stand out better. I think your Sony camera is FF, so a big crop should be achievable and still maintain quality - that's where Topaz Photo Ai is so good, in being able to rescue a tight crop etc. You may not have this situation to justify it though.
  Posted: 11/19/2024 16:55:52
Maria Small   Maria Small
Thank you for your warm welcome and encouragement. I'm excited to learn with and from all of you.   Posted: 11/19/2024 19:43:44



 

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