Maria Small
About the Image(s)
Last week I went back to one of my favorite places to photograph, the Huntington Botanical Gardens in Pasadena, southern California. I was in the Japanese Garden when I spotted a few Goldfinches feeding themselves with gusto among these lovely lavender blooms. There was one bird who caught my attention because he seemed oblivious to my presence, although I did keep good distance between them and him and me because I didn’t want to interrupt what looked like a much enjoyable meal for everyone.
I shot the image with my Sony A 7III and my 50-400 mm Tamron lens. My settings were Shutter Priority, f6.3, 1/500 s, ISO 400, at 368mm.
Since what I wanted to highlight was how focused and enthused the bird was on his
meal, my processing in Adobe Photoshop involved a big crop, then using Camera Raw I increased the exposure some, as well as contrast and vibrance. I also adjusted the background to lighten it so as to make the bird pop. I also used the Remove tool to get rid of or lighten either withered buds and leaves around the bird which I thought were too distracting.
I am brand new in the group and want to fast forward improving my skills in both photography and processing in Adobe Photoshop. Your feedback is most welcome.
8 comments posted
It sounds like you had quite the enjoyable shooting session - This bright fella sure does have a lot going for him. I like Bruce's input. I find the bird to be a bit crunchy but I'm not sure if it's from contrast or sharpening after such a large crop, or maybe some Topaz artifacting.
I like your color grading!   Posted: 11/15/2024 22:08:49
You did well developing your image - it looks well presented, although I would have lightened the shadows a tad more in your version. We all crave for clean backgrounds with some foliage to give a story for the bird/location, but when confronted with so much detail, Bruce is right to hone in to a smaller canvas - and then darkening the background/lightening bird makes 'him' stand out better. I think your Sony camera is FF, so a big crop should be achievable and still maintain quality - that's where Topaz Photo Ai is so good, in being able to rescue a tight crop etc. You may not have this situation to justify it though.
  Posted: 11/19/2024 16:55:52