Maria Small
About the Image(s)
Last week I went back to one of my favorite places to photograph, the Huntington Botanical Gardens in Pasadena, southern California. I was in the Japanese Garden when I spotted a few Goldfinches feeding themselves with gusto among these lovely lavender blooms. There was one bird who caught my attention because he seemed oblivious to my presence, although I did keep good distance between them and him and me because I didn’t want to interrupt what looked like a much enjoyable meal for everyone.
I shot the image with my Sony A 7III and my 50-400 mm Tamron lens. My settings were Shutter Priority, f6.3, 1/500 s, ISO 400, at 368mm.
Since what I wanted to highlight was how focused and enthused the bird was on his
meal, my processing in Adobe Photoshop involved a big crop, then using Camera Raw I increased the exposure some, as well as contrast and vibrance. I also adjusted the background to lighten it so as to make the bird pop. I also used the Remove tool to get rid of or lighten either withered buds and leaves around the bird which I thought were too distracting.
I am brand new in the group and want to fast forward improving my skills in both photography and processing in Adobe Photoshop. Your feedback is most welcome.
This round’s discussion is now closed!
8 comments posted
It sounds like you had quite the enjoyable shooting session - This bright fella sure does have a lot going for him. I like Bruce's input. I find the bird to be a bit crunchy but I'm not sure if it's from contrast or sharpening after such a large crop, or maybe some Topaz artifacting.
I like your color grading!   Posted: 11/15/2024 22:08:49
You did well developing your image - it looks well presented, although I would have lightened the shadows a tad more in your version. We all crave for clean backgrounds with some foliage to give a story for the bird/location, but when confronted with so much detail, Bruce is right to hone in to a smaller canvas - and then darkening the background/lightening bird makes 'him' stand out better. I think your Sony camera is FF, so a big crop should be achievable and still maintain quality - that's where Topaz Photo Ai is so good, in being able to rescue a tight crop etc. You may not have this situation to justify it though.
  Posted: 11/19/2024 16:55:52