Don York
March 2025 - Untitled
About the Image(s)
Image taken at Crystal Bridges, AK, a floating art gallery near San Waltons hometown in Arkansas.
Taken with Sony ZV-E10 at 1/250, f5.6, iso 100
3 comments posted
This image is very busy and feels dark and muddy. Is there some portion that could stand on its own. Perhaps the railing along the waterway or the roof. Posted: 03/14/2025 18:10:14
All the lines especially those on the roof make this great subject matter for mono and have quite a lot of impact. I totally agree with Jerry. Inclusion of more of the left showing all the steps and a landing at the top would lead the viewer from the bottom up then off to the right along the top walkway which I think would be a stronger composition. Posted: 03/16/2025 01:15:31
Patrick O’Brien
Since the eye is attracted to the lines and their perpendicular opposition, I would crop vertically to focus on the linear aspect and remove the extraneous stuff at the sides. Not really a very attactive building to me anyway. Posted: 03/16/2025 01:57:34