Keisha, this is lovely. I'd comment about her drink being on the edge of the frame, I think a little room between the two would look better. But your composition and processing are superb, well done. Street phtography seems to be being called "snapshots" in some circles now, which I really dislike. This isn't a snap, it's beautifully worked photographic street art.

I'm really going to miss you when you depart for group 20. You can do two groups (and certain favoured people are allowed a third!) (Alas not me. I do 95 as well as 64.) Do stay!

  Posted: 11/14/2024 08:24:17

Keisha, your monochrome image is wonderful! I like everything about its range of tonality, sepia tone selection, and overall composition and exposure. I like the image balance with the young lady, the drink and the shoes. I particularly like the contrast of the textures and lines in the stone steps and building and the soft tones and curves of the woman. You have an exquisite eye.   Posted: 11/14/2024 17:45:04

I concur with everything Stuart & John have said especially the drink being fully included. Lighting is exquisite and the shoes on a lower ledge adds to a strong story. I love the way you have composed this with a contrast of vertical & horizontal masonry and subject placement off to the side framed by the small alcove behind her. It is a fantastic image but I think you could make it better by cropping out the two light verticals at the top far left as this would delete a distraction, simplify and place even greater impact on the young lady. I have taken the liberty. What do you think?   Posted: 11/18/2024 08:46:16

I love the range of textures and the serene mood that the image created in my mind. I agree that the cup can go.   Posted: 11/19/2024 14:02:10