Keisha Becerra
November 2024 - Time to Relax
About the Image(s)
Here is a photo I took at the Parthenon in Nashville, a busy spot where both tourists and locals like to hang out making it a good spot for street photography. As I was walking around I spotted this person dressed all in white, sitting on the steps and just enjoying the day. She seemed so relaxed it made for a really peaceful photo. When composing the photo I left a lot of space in the direction she was looking to give a feeling of openness and tranquility.
Settings
* Focal length - 105mm
* 1/1,000s
* f/6.7
This round’s discussion is now closed!
6 comments posted
Keisha, this is lovely. I'd comment about her drink being on the edge of the frame, I think a little room between the two would look better. But your composition and processing are superb, well done. Street phtography seems to be being called "snapshots" in some circles now, which I really dislike. This isn't a snap, it's beautifully worked photographic street art.
I'm really going to miss you when you depart for group 20. You can do two groups (and certain favoured people are allowed a third!) (Alas not me. I do 95 as well as 64.) Do stay!
Posted: 11/14/2024 08:24:17
I'm really going to miss you when you depart for group 20. You can do two groups (and certain favoured people are allowed a third!) (Alas not me. I do 95 as well as 64.) Do stay!
Posted: 11/14/2024 08:24:17
(Groups 5 & 20 & 92)
Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback and kind words about my work-I really appreciate it! I'll definitely take note of your suggestion about the drink being on the edge of the frame; little details like that can make such a big difference, and I always value your insight.
I completely agree about the term "snapshots" being thrown around-it really doesn't do justice to the artistry and thought behind street photography. Thank you for recognizing the effort I put into my work-it means a lot coming from you!
I'll miss being part of this group, but I'm excited about exploring new creative challenges in group 20 and beyond. I'll still be around in groups 5, 92, and 20, so please feel free to share your wonderful feedback with me there! You're always so supportive, and I truly value your and the other members perspective! Posted: 11/28/2024 21:47:01
I completely agree about the term "snapshots" being thrown around-it really doesn't do justice to the artistry and thought behind street photography. Thank you for recognizing the effort I put into my work-it means a lot coming from you!
I'll miss being part of this group, but I'm excited about exploring new creative challenges in group 20 and beyond. I'll still be around in groups 5, 92, and 20, so please feel free to share your wonderful feedback with me there! You're always so supportive, and I truly value your and the other members perspective! Posted: 11/28/2024 21:47:01
Keisha, your monochrome image is wonderful! I like everything about its range of tonality, sepia tone selection, and overall composition and exposure. I like the image balance with the young lady, the drink and the shoes. I particularly like the contrast of the textures and lines in the stone steps and building and the soft tones and curves of the woman. You have an exquisite eye. Posted: 11/14/2024 17:45:04
I concur with everything Stuart & John have said especially the drink being fully included. Lighting is exquisite and the shoes on a lower ledge adds to a strong story. I love the way you have composed this with a contrast of vertical & horizontal masonry and subject placement off to the side framed by the small alcove behind her. It is a fantastic image but I think you could make it better by cropping out the two light verticals at the top far left as this would delete a distraction, simplify and place even greater impact on the young lady. I have taken the liberty. What do you think? Posted: 11/18/2024 08:46:16
I love the range of textures and the serene mood that the image created in my mind. I agree that the cup can go. Posted: 11/19/2024 14:02:10
(Groups 5 & 20 & 92)
Hi All,
I wanted to take a moment to share my heartfelt gratitude and bid you all farewell. My time with this group has been incredibly rewarding, and I've learned so much from the talent, feedback, and passion each of you brings to monochrome photography. The community here has truly inspired me to see the world through new perspectives, and I'm grateful for the connections I've made along the way.
As I continue my creative journey, I've decided to join the Creative and Street Photography groups. I'm excited to explore new styles, further develop my photography skills, and incorporate what I learn into my mixed media art projects. While I'll miss being part of this group, I look forward to applying everything I've gained here to my future endeavors.
Thank you all for the support, insight, and inspiration you've provided. I hope our paths will cross again in other creative spaces! Posted: 11/28/2024 21:38:58
I wanted to take a moment to share my heartfelt gratitude and bid you all farewell. My time with this group has been incredibly rewarding, and I've learned so much from the talent, feedback, and passion each of you brings to monochrome photography. The community here has truly inspired me to see the world through new perspectives, and I'm grateful for the connections I've made along the way.
As I continue my creative journey, I've decided to join the Creative and Street Photography groups. I'm excited to explore new styles, further develop my photography skills, and incorporate what I learn into my mixed media art projects. While I'll miss being part of this group, I look forward to applying everything I've gained here to my future endeavors.
Thank you all for the support, insight, and inspiration you've provided. I hope our paths will cross again in other creative spaces! Posted: 11/28/2024 21:38:58