Hi Brad, I think that the bird definitely needs to fly in this direction, leaving a trail of light in her wake, to guide the truck foreward. No wonder that you are happy with the truck and the sky. I like the lighting very much, too, it is like there were a street lamp out of sight that illuminates the truck and the foreground against the dark background. And thank you for explaining in detail the clever trick of giving motion blur to the bird!   Posted: 09/07/2023 09:18:21

This is such an interesting image, Brad. I keep coming back to it because, for me, it works very well on an emotional level while eluding an "explanation" of what it seems to be about. Well, there is a great deal of art that I can't "explain" but I can appreciate.
I think the bird is just perfect where it is; it's not simply an element in the picture, its position and blur show that it's leaving, right now. The gorgeous light in the sky makes a beautiful trail that the bird is leaving - or perhaps it's the path it is riding.
I love the texture and color on the truck. The truck is such an integrated part of the field and the road - it obviously can move, but it's as stationary as the field, and it's empty. For some reason, to me, it feels as if not just the cab of the truck is empty, but that the truck itself is an empty shell that the bird has left.
So, for me, there's something poignant about the empty truck but a sense of joy for the bird being able to fly to wherever it is going.
I think it's a beautiful, complex, and compelling image.   Posted: 09/15/2023 15:23:22

Hi Brad,
What a wonderful image you have created this month. I like the colors and the nighttime light setup. The flying bird adds a dynamic element to the image and complements the story. My only suggestion is regarding the blur effect on the bird; I would prefer to see the movement just behind it, like a wake, rather than in front of the wings and neck.
Thanks for your detailed explanation about how you created it.




  Posted: 09/15/2023 23:20:37

There is a great difference between the sharpness of the truck and the blur of the bird. What shutter speed did you use? Just kidding.
I like the composition and the northern lights. The truck is very plain. Maybe it should have a statement one the side. Something like 'Big White Bird Delivery'.
Overall it is a very original image.   Posted: 09/16/2023 16:19:21

This is a complex image that just may keep you enthralled for a while. That's a compliment. An abandoned truck on a country road with this wonderful lighting invites extraterrestrials or surrealists. In the movie "Signs" the scariest scene was when Mel Gibson was in the corn field at night and his flashlight catches a glimpse of a leg of the e.t. turning amidst the corn. I saw only the calf of the e.t. and that was enough to make me jump. If this were my scene, I would eliminate the bird and its trail, darken everything except the truck, and have a part of someone walking out of the scene. Your elements of night, abandoned truck, and lonely country road work very well together and are work exploring.   Posted: 09/18/2023 09:42:45

Alan, I really like your suggestion. It would make more sense from a story perspective. I will play with this idea. Interestingly this truck was parked down the street from Stonehenge. Although the rock circle has been on my bucket list, and enjoyable to see in person, I found the surrounding fields equally, if not more captivating. There were a lot of hippie type people camped out on this road.   Posted: 09/18/2023 15:58:53

Visiting...
very cool composite.
The night and added aurora are wonderful and the icm bird adds to the scene. The green truck and composition with the bird fits well.
perhaps darken the road a tad?   Posted: 09/26/2023 23:02:15