Pinaki Sarkar
September 2023 - LANDSCAPE DOESN'T ONLY MEAN MOUNTAIN & RIVERS
About the Image(s)
Technical:
F5.6,1/4000,ISO 1100,500mm, No flash. Metering Pattern.
Processed though Nik and lightroom to bring the mood.
Background:
Shot at a a local arboretum
This round’s discussion is now closed!
5 comments posted
Frank Kennedy
In my view you have captured a very colourful image. The foreground is separated from background which has been well done.
As I view your image the left hand side is not in focus. Would you consider cropping that part of the subject and darkening the background a little? Perhaps consider then adding some contrast to the foreground? Posted: 09/07/2023 02:07:27
As I view your image the left hand side is not in focus. Would you consider cropping that part of the subject and darkening the background a little? Perhaps consider then adding some contrast to the foreground? Posted: 09/07/2023 02:07:27
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I think Frank has a valid point about the left side, but the crop he chose is perhaps too tight on the foreground flowers. My suggestion is to remove the soft flowers on the left and, like Frank suggests, darken the background slightly. Posted: 09/15/2023 13:45:54
Thanks a lot. Posted: 09/23/2023 09:20:26
I think Frank's suggestion is an improvement in that it takes that beautiful group of purple flowers a bit off center, as well as taking out a bit of the muted purple in the background Posted: 09/15/2023 15:33:14
Hi Pinaki,
When I look at your image it represents an inviting flower garden landscape with an identifiable foreground, mid-ground and background that enhance a sense of depth for me.
I also agree with the concern about the left side and like Tom's suggest for cropping. Posted: 09/19/2023 11:25:34
When I look at your image it represents an inviting flower garden landscape with an identifiable foreground, mid-ground and background that enhance a sense of depth for me.
I also agree with the concern about the left side and like Tom's suggest for cropping. Posted: 09/19/2023 11:25:34