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Two Worlds by Robert Atkins

July 2025 - Two Worlds

July 2025 - Robert Atkins

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About the Image(s)

This month’s image is another from my trip to Acadia NP a few weeks ago. This was taken before sunrise on a somewhat overcast morning from the edge of Eagle Lake. Mosquitoes were out in force so I was well feasted upon as I lay on my belly to compose the shot. The camera was mere inches from the rock in front.

What I like about this image is the contrast between the harsh foreground and soft background. The former is composed of hard, rough, textured rock, fractured into a maze of jagged patterns, most of which are submerged under the water. The later is smooth, ethereal, soft, and heavenly. It is two different worlds, meeting somewhere under the lake and emerging at the near and far ends to show their very different natures. Hence the title, Two Worlds.

I played for multiple hours in LR and PS with the composition - the original was a landscape image. I tried many different crops as well as perspective shift similar to what I could have accomplished with a view camera, before landing on this portrait framed image. But I am still not sure the composition is sufficiently balanced, and on this point I’d appreciate opinions and suggestions. I’ve attached a landscape version (still not quite the original) for comparison if it helps in considering this point.

Sony a1, Tamron E 24mm 2.8 F051 lens, 1.3 sec, f16, ISO 100, polarizer, focus stack of 8 images


10 comments posted




Rick Hulbert   Rick Hulbert
Hi Robert,
I really appreciate the sense of depth, both below and above the water surface.
I think both formats presented are great, but prefer your selected choice.
Personally, I would have wanted a bit more sky visible in the distance. . . but don't crop anything off of the bottom of the scene.   Posted: 07/04/2025 22:49:29
Robert Atkins   Robert Atkins
Thanks Rick. Yes, I agree that the top is a little bit tight. Had I shot it as a vertical then I would have had the room.   Posted: 07/20/2025 00:17:33



Bruce Flamenbaum   Bruce Flamenbaum
Great shot. It has an eerie mystical feel to it.   Posted: 07/13/2025 18:17:03
Robert Atkins   Robert Atkins
Thanks Bruce. Yes, there was a quiet, mystical feel to the morning.   Posted: 07/20/2025 00:18:45



Jim Williams
I love the idea here. The foreground has great texture and patterns. As rick mentioned, I also think that the background feels too constricted. I would have liked to see more sky, I would think that a sky with more textured clouds would provide balance with the rocks as well as more visual interest in the midground. But, returning when conditions are better may not be an option. Also, from a background perspective, as well as feeling constricted, I would also play with a linear gradient to darken down the mountains which could add balance with the dark rocks.

Lastly, this might be a good candidate for a black and white image and lean into a more contrasty vibe.   Posted: 07/25/2025 16:54:30
Robert Atkins   Robert Atkins
Thanks Jim. I too would like a little more sky above. I did not see this as a vertical when I captured it, and was pressing to get everything in at the bottom in a horizontal framing.

For me the image is about the juxtaposition of the soft ethereal background with more harsh textured foreground. So I probably don't want to darken the mountains with that in mind (and in fact I deliberately softened them). In contrast, I may darken some bits of the foreground further to enhance that "Two Worlds" appearance.   Posted: 07/25/2025 19:42:56
Jim Williams
Nice! That's one of the great things about photography imo, it is all an artistic choice.   Posted: 07/25/2025 20:08:28
Robert Atkins   Robert Atkins
Thanks Jim. I too would like a little more sky above. I did not see this as a vertical when I captured it, and was pressing to get everything in at the bottom in a horizontal framing.

For me the image is about the juxtaposition of the soft ethereal background with more harsh textured foreground. So I probably don't want to darken the mountains with that in mind (and in fact I deliberately softened them). In contrast, I may darken some bits of the foreground further to enhance that "Two Worlds" appearance.   Posted: 07/25/2025 20:12:44



Pinaki Sarkar   Pinaki Sarkar
The rocky lakebed visible through the clear water adds texture and depth. It anchors the viewer's eye and creates a connection to the scene.The image uses foreground (rocks), midground (lake), and background (mountains and mist). Subdued tones and no harsh contrast helps to maintain serenity. I do prefer the original. I would try to make the fog a little dense and the foreground little vibrant.
Overall this is a superb image.   Posted: 07/27/2025 22:59:55
Robert Atkins   Robert Atkins
Thanks Pinaki - your suggestions are helpful.
  Posted: 07/28/2025 04:17:08



 

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