Mary Hinsen, BPSA  


Nevis Valley Cemetery by Mary Hinsen, BPSA

April 2026 - Nevis Valley Cemetery

April 2026 - Mary Hinsen, BPSA

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About the Image(s)

I was going to delete this image because it's just boring. Then I stopped myself - I normally drive past this historic cemetery and never give it a thought. We only stopped this time to give the dog a run! Not much of the original cemetery remains, as you can see, but it holds stories of goldminers who were part of this area's history - stories that should not be forgotten.

I admire the work of Eric Malm. I'm not always a fan of ICM images, but he always begins his movement with something in focus. I like his technique. Obviously, the effect in this image was not achieved in camera, but I thought introducing movement would tell the story of driving past, without taking the time to stop and notice.

Focal length for this image was 14.00mm. Exposure settings were 1/250sec, f/9, ISO125.

In Photoshop, I copied the background layer, removed dust spots and added a motion blur. I painted back the cairn at full opacity, and the fence and gate at 40% opacity. I used a colour balance layer to adjust tones, and added a LUT to increase the warmth in the hills and foreground. Finally, I cropped slightly from the bottom.

Next time I drive through the Nevis Valley, I will stop and photograph with purpose!


5 comments posted




Denise McKay   Denise McKay
For some reason I didn't know where I was supposed to focus my eyes. I felt like there was too much landscape in the image. Even though the fence was close to the center, it didn't feel right that the fence was the point of focus. So using the rule of thirds I cropped the image on top and bottom, then from the sides I placed the left edge of the fence on the cross-hairs of the left bottom third and the cairn on the right bottom third. To me, it balanced out the composition without losing that feeling of rushing by.

Does this still seem to catch your intent?   Posted: 04/06/2026 20:28:16
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Mary Hinsen   Mary Hinsen
Thanks Denise - I like what you have done. I should have played around a bit more with it! Everything is better balanced with your crop.   Posted: 04/06/2026 20:52:10



Jan Handman   Jan Handman
I like this Mary! You applied just the right amount of motion blur and keeping the cairn in focus and the fence in partial focus worked well. I do like Denise's crop to eliminate some of the less interesting parts. I even wondered if a little less sky might bring more attention to the cairn and fence, so I tried it. Once I'd gone that far, I decided to enlarge the cairn a bit. I also burned the shadows and dodged the highlights on it a bit. I'll ask the same question as Denise: does this still catch your intent? Or did I go too far?   Posted: 04/11/2026 20:26:29
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Georgianne Giese   Georgianne Giese
The original image was quite boring (as an image, not a place!) The motion you applied did add more interest to the image.
I did something similar to what Jan did. I cropped it a bit more radically, into a panorama. But to capture the direction of movement in the image, I highlighted a few lines and added the rocky walkway leading up to the fence.
  Posted: 04/11/2026 21:02:53
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Carol Watson   Carol Watson
I think you have added a great deal more interest to the image and I like the impression of driving by. I think it might be worth trying path blur rather than motion blur, as this just gives blur in one direction, rather than either side of the objects. Like the others, I think it works better with a tighter more panoramic crop.   Posted: 04/16/2026 12:52:04



 

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