Mary Hinsen, BPSA  


Lost in the Music by Mary Hinsen, BPSA

January 2025 - Lost in the Music

January 2025 - Mary Hinsen, BPSA

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January 2025 - Mary Hinsen, BPSA

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Camera settings: 28mm, 1/250sec, f/7.1, ISO160
Our family came together and enjoyed Christmas outdoors - it's been lovely and warm here so we've all made the most of it. Our granddaughter Celine is 7 years old, and chose to do her violin practice outside in the sun on our deck each day. On this day, Celine's sister Chloe and her 3-year-old cousin went out with her, and they all had fun dancing to the Christmas songs Celine was playing. It was lovely to watch, and I sneaked a few shots in before they saw me. I asked them to keep going, but it wasn't the same - they were too self-conscious knowing Nanny's camera was pointed their way!

I had taken a number of images, but not one was right. So I chose two that worked and decided to do a composite. I started with adding two girls to the image of Celine, but it didn't look right. So, I masked young Mila only, used that as a selection, copied onto her own transparent layer and copied over to the main image.
I had a few goes at creating shadows before I got something that looked vaguely realistic, so would love to hear if anyone has a good way to do it!
I copied the layer with Mila on it, selected the bottom of the two layers and used the transform and puppet warp tools to position relative to the other shadows in the main image. I locked transparent pixels, dragged a black to white gradient over, unlocked, changed to multiply blend mode and lowered opacity. I blurred the shadow in pieces by making selections with a feathered rectangular marquee and using Gaussian blur at various levels. I clipped a colour balance adjustment layer to this and matched colour as closely as possible to the other shadows.
I stamped up, cropped in and removed the pot plant as it was a distraction. Lastly I used Nik ColorEfex to add a pastel overlay, lowered the overall opacity and painted it out just a little further from the girls. I wanted to keep everything soft, but to keep detail in the girls and ensure they stand out as the focus.

I look forward to your comments and suggestions.


5 comments posted




Denise McKay   Denise McKay
This is a charming image Mary! I like how you've added and positioned the second child. To me, it looks like she was originally there. I love how you captured the movement in Celine's skirt.

I would suggest a little tighter crop of the girls to help keep them the center of attention. Also, I know your intent was to make the image a little softer and "lighter", however I wanted to see what would happen if I darkened the background a bit and also brought out more detail in her skirt. So I masked the background and reduced the exposure to make the girls pop a little more. Then I masked the skirt and increased detail and saturation a bit. I've attached my results with the suggested crop.

Really sweet image!   Posted: 01/11/2025 17:20:39
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Jan Handman   Jan Handman
Very nice composite Mary. You did a good job of selecting the second child and placing her in the scene. I agree with Denise on the crop, so that the children aren't quite so much right in the center of the image. You worked hard on the shadows, but they're so good in the original photos, I'm wondering why you didn't just use them. They're very realistic! :-) My eye got drawn to the electrical towers in the background close to the violinist's face, and then I couldn't unsee them. So maybe take them out with the spot healing tool in PS. This is an endearing image that will be a special memory for years to come. Well done.   Posted: 01/17/2025 21:28:20



Connie Reinhart   Connie Reinhart
This is an excellent composite. Overlapping the little girl with the neck of the violin is a small detail that makes this look like just one image. Very well done. The dreamy quality you added is just the right touch for these two little girls. The swirl of the skirt and the expressions on their faces echo that dreamy mood.   Posted: 01/20/2025 20:27:18



Rita Johnston   Rita Johnston
Beautiful photo! I like the addition of pastel at the end, really softening it up. A memory of Christmas is always precious.   Posted: 01/20/2025 21:47:28



Carol Watson   Carol Watson
Hi Mary, you did a great job putting the two images together and you have really captured the movement to the music. I agree with Denise on a slightly tighter crop. A lovely image.   Posted: 01/22/2025 09:32:00



 

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