Denise McKay  


Abandoned by Denise McKay

January 2025 - Abandoned

January 2025 - Denise McKay

Original

January 2025 - Denise McKay

Original 2

About the Image(s)

I recently took a walk on a cold, gloomy day and came across this abandoned ball resting in the opening of a water drainage sewer. It seemed to fit the mood of the day; dreary and kind of sad. So that's what I was trying to evoke in this image. Shot handheld with settings of ISO 200, 70mm, f6.3, 1/200 sec.

I did two versions - a black and white that I posted as final, and a color that is Original 2.

Final was edited as follows:

In Lightroom:
- cropped
- converted to black and white
- increased texture and clarity
- used masks on the dead grasses and parts of the cement and reduced highlights

In Luminar Neo used a filter that opened up the shadows and added more texture and sharpness. Then took it back into Lightroom to add a dark vignette.

Original two was a color version. I did the same Lightroom edits (except b & w conversion), but then took it into Topaz Studio 2. There I added a painterly look called Expressionism which I customized to my liking. That included using masks to reduce the effect in certain areas, and editing the Smudge filter that was part of the Expressionism "look". I also added a dark vignette.

Again, I was trying to bring out the gloomy feel of the scene as I saw it without going overboard in the processing. I'm torn between the black and white and color versions. Your feedback will be appreciated.


7 comments posted




Connie Reinhart   Connie Reinhart
Both images are very well done. For me, the B&W has more of an 'abandoned' feeling to it. Kudos to you for seeing something most people would ignore. Wow. You and the others have really inspired me to try new things. Happy New Year to all!   Posted: 01/08/2025 19:49:11
Denise McKay   Denise McKay
Thanks for your feedback Connie!   Posted: 01/13/2025 13:30:37



Jan Handman   Jan Handman
Love this Denise. You really nailed the abandoned aspect, especially in the B/W version. The grunge look is perfect for communicating the gloomy, sad vibe. All the textures are wonderful. My only nit-pick is to eliminate the light pieces of grass in the dark area on the right. My eye kept being drawn there. I also felt the tonal range of the ball and little glass bottle could use some tweaking, so I used the Dodge tool to pump up the contrast and hopefully draw the viewer's eye to those important pieces of this great image. Nice capture on your part to see and then process this humble image full of ambiance!   Posted: 01/12/2025 21:45:46
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Denise McKay   Denise McKay
Thanks for your feedback and example Jan. I can see the difference.   Posted: 01/13/2025 13:31:48



Rita Johnston   Rita Johnston
Denise, excellent conversion and I agree with the B&W. You brought out a lot of texture not seen in the color. Thanks for the info on the processing you used. I am learning from this.   Posted: 01/20/2025 21:58:43



Denise McKay   Denise McKay
Thanks for your feedback Rita!   Posted: 01/21/2025 19:27:09



Carol Watson   Carol Watson
Well seen Denise, there are lots of interesting textures in this image. I think your BW version works well but I think the ball gets a little lost and think it stands out better in the colour version. I think you might also try a tighter crop as shown.   Posted: 01/22/2025 10:20:40
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