Larry Treadwell
About the Image(s)
Nikon D850, 200-400mm ISO 500, f5.6, 1/1000 from monopod
June in Florida is mating season for the Woodstorks. I have located a pond banked on the west side by mangroves a scrub pines both of which offer ample nesting material. My intended goal was to simply capture shots of Woodstork bringing nesting material back to his nest. The only challenge I offered myself was that I wanted a stork to be carrying a large stick and not some little twig as is often the case.
I arrived just after sunrise and selected a shooting location with my back to the east because this would allow the birds to be largely front lit by the rising sun and also because the off shore winds would be blowing from east to west thus guaranteeing the majority of the returning storks would be flying from the scrub pines toward my camera. As the stork returned I knew it would drop into a glide with wings fully spread. Since my plan was to capture only birds with large sticks I hoped the horizontal position of the stick would complement and balance the wing spread. The storks didn’t quite get my message about keeping the stick horizontal, but this image with its size still works fairly well. My camera position also allowed me to be close to eye level with the arriving bird and providing a stronger feeling of intimacy. In post I adjusted the white balance to retain the whites in the bird’s wings. The low position of the sun helped to light the underside of the dark wings and the dark background helps to separate the subject. I would have liked a bit more space on the right, but at least the wing tips were saved. I cropped this into a pano format to emphasize the spread of the wings and bring more attention to the bird and the stick.
This round’s discussion is now closed!
11 comments posted
Great capture, especially given the constraints that you placed on yourself! The lighting on the bird is spot on! I think we all learn from your stories about how to position yourself for a possible shot. Thanks for this advice! My only suggestions for improvement might be to consider adding a little more room on the right and left of the image. The bird's right wing (from our perspective) is almost touching the edge of the image. Also, I might reduce the luminousity of the green shrugs in the background.   Posted: 09/08/2023 14:23:04
I have reduced the luminance so that may be a question of monitor calibration. Greens are always hard they just seem to want to GLOW.   Posted: 09/24/2023 15:37:50
I was a bit worried about the nearness to the edge of the right wing, but nothing is clipped and I guess the judges liked the story. I was just hoping for an acceptance.   Posted: 09/10/2023 16:56:16
  Posted: 09/10/2023 19:28:02
That extra space thing seems to generate lots of discussion. There was a bit more but the image was not perfectly straight and when I tilted it to get the wings level I lost the extra space. Visually most of the feather tips are dark and the one feather that is bright has a bit of extra space maybe that was all the judges saw. I really cropped this tight because I wanted all the attention on the bird's shoulders and that piece of lumber. But I'lln keep in mind you extra space request.   Posted: 09/24/2023 15:44:21
I probably wouldn't have thought about the size of the stick as an important element to watch for, but it really does add tremendously especially with the story-telling aspect. The light angle illuminating the belly is important as well.
I'd also like just a wee bit more space all around but obviously that's a matter of taste.
Congrats on the medal.   Posted: 09/12/2023 14:59:16
Initially I was ticked about not having more space on the right. as you can see he is approaching slightly angled from the right and is coming toward the camera position. While I was tracking and shooting things started to happen fast. I was really worried about wing position, and stick position and I waited just a bit longer than I should have to trip the shutter. I don't think the judges worried about the right edge because the background is pretty dark there and the story is about the bright bird with a well lit belly, top of wings and the piece of lumber. I think the story ties the viewer to the bird and the stick that I think really stands out and you never see sticks that large.
I've always been a planner but teaching for the PSA has turned me into a more thoughtful planner. I think I shoot with more intent than I used to (landscapes included) and I think I'm getting more high quality images than I used to   Posted: 09/12/2023 16:20:23
I find I get better results when I shoot with intent rather than just hoping something works out. This doesn't mean if something catches my eye I won't take that shot, rather that I focus my efforts getting something meaningful.   Posted: 09/24/2023 15:34:57