Bud Ralston
About the Image(s)
I'm submitting early for March because I will be in Mexico the first week. I look forward to warmth and sunshine after bathing in the atmospheric river of solid rain for the last week. I don't know if there will be any photo opportunities there, but I may bring a camera. Here's my submission:
Each spring, the UC Santa Cruz Arboretum is full of hummingbirds attracted to the various blooming plants. Numerous Anna's, Allen's, and occasionally other varieties of hummingbirds flit from plant to plant, making this an excellent opportunity to photograph these beautiful little birds.
Nikon Z9, Nikon Z 70??“200 F/2.8 S, CF 300 mm, 1/2000 sec @ f/8.0, 0 EV, ISO 1000, Center-weighted metering
Using Lightroom Classic, I first removed noise. Then, I cropped the image using masks, darkened the background slightly, and increased the exposure of the bird and the foreground plant. I slightly sharpened the bird. Then, I did a -10 Post-Crop vignette.
This round’s discussion is now closed!
8 comments posted
For me the image is about composition. As long as you are going to make the large crop just go ahead and crop for composition. As I look at the image there is a huge amount of red. Red draws the eye like a magnet draws iron. So the red dominates your image. Instead, consider my revised crop below. By reducing the top area focus is increased on the bird. By cropping the bottom I've used the red to frame the hummer. Since the eye is drawn to the red and the red surrounds the bird the bird is not much more dominate in the scene.   Posted: 03/02/2025 08:11:41
Nice wing position captured, with both fully extended, and the bird is placed well relative to the flowers too. I like your processing in terms of what you did to darken the background and warm up the colors. The red is vibrant, which is part of the story with hummers that tend to be attracted to red!
I agree with the others that this could benefit from a crop for composition, so I had to play with my vision for it. Yes the red draws the eye, but I like the repeating reds and opposing shapes of the bloom spikes so tried to emphasize that.   Posted: 03/16/2025 18:09:08
That said, the crops (for me) tweak not only the photo but the story it tells. In Larry's version I see the hummingbird dropping down to the flower rather than emerging from the background - a different perspective that retains the flower-and-bird as equal participants. Butch's version makes it all about the hummingbird, and the flower (to me) becomes less important. Cindy's crop is much like Bud's version, but the smaller size emphasizes (to me) the subject and improves the light by removing some of the dark surround.
There you have it, a synopsis of some beautiful versions by someone who knows nothing about photos :-) I now return you to your regularly scheduled programming. :-)   Posted: 03/20/2025 22:31:44