Charles Jemmott
November 2024 - Tabletop Sportscars
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About the Image(s)
This was a Tabletop photography exercise; Strobe for Key, Flash for Fill, 1/200, f11, ISO 200, 50mm
5 comments posted
For me, it is a little too busy. One car at a time would be better. I am not sure what the subject is. The lighting is not important. It sort of looks like a car crash. Sharpness is spot on. Posted: 11/05/2024 18:14:49
I love your clarity, contrast and focus, as well as the reflections which add so much to the image. Technically well done. I do agree with Chuck, that only one would have made a stronger pnoto. My eye keeps going back and forth between the two. Posted: 11/07/2024 15:49:20
I agree with the 2 cars. Maybe fun to go with 3 as it could form a triangle. To me the cars are too close almost touching. If you want to use 2 cars maybe make them both at the same angle with a little more room. You did a nice job with the reflections, tones and focus. Posted: 11/07/2024 18:02:12
This is a fun image -I don't mind the 2 cars and their closeness - it does rather look like a car crash. I prefer the BW version - the colours make it overly busy, I think - and I really like the reflections. Great sharpness, exposure and tonal range. The crop (and cloning out the table edges?) works for me. Posted: 11/11/2024 00:59:56
All, thanks for taking the time to provide feedback. Posted: 11/19/2024 01:07:48