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Shari Garnsey - Sound Memory by Shari Garnsey

August 2026 - Shari Garnsey - Sound Memory

August 2026 - Shari Garnsey

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About the Image(s)

The remains of an old pier along the sound side of Hatteras Island, photographed across the winter marsh on a cold, blustery afternoon.
I wanted to capture the starkness of the scene and the sense of isolation ??”the deteriorating pier against a gray winter sky and choppy water. I placed the pier along the horizon and used the darker marsh grass as a strong foreground. The wind-bent grasses also add a subtle sense of movement to an otherwise still scene.
I converted the image to black and white to remove the muted color and emphasize the shapes, textures and repeating structure of the pier. In post, I cropped some and then in Camera Raw, I worked with the tonal range to maintain detail in the dark grasses and stormy sky while allowing the water and distant horizon to remain lighter, helping separate the pier from its surroundings.
Looking forward to this groups thoughts on whether I captured the mood.
Camera: Nikon Z8
Lens: NIKKOR Z 70-200mm f/2.8 VR S
Settings: 70mm, 1/60 sec at f/16, ISO 800, 0.67 EV


9 comments posted




Barbara Gore   Barbara Gore
Hi Shari. Nicely done. I've spent some time looking at this image, and it gives off a film-noir atmosphere for me. While classic noir is usually urban scenes, the deep shadows, bright, cloud filled sky, and sense of isolation gives off a noir like mood. I'm a big fan of negative space, but I wonder if cropping it to a pano (22x10) would better show off the mood and create a more cinematic feel. Just a thought. Here's my suggestion.   Posted: 08/07/2026 20:03:43
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Shari Garnsey   Shari Garnsey
Great suggestion - thank you. I was trying to keep the jetty small in comparison to the sky and foreground to keep the sense of isolation - but I very much like what your crop does too. I am going to play with that some.   Posted: 08/13/2026 18:16:01



Robert Cordivari   Robert Cordivari
Hi Shari,
I think you definitely captured the mood. I particulary think the missing parts of the pier add to the feeling of isolation and decay. Some of the grass in the foreground might be toned down a bit, I find my eye darting to those brighter grasses. I also like Barbara's suggestion for cropping but both work well.

A very moody picture for sure.
Rob
  Posted: 08/13/2026 16:05:05
Shari Garnsey   Shari Garnsey
Thank you - I am seeing the spots on the grass now - I'll work on that.   Posted: 08/13/2026 18:16:45



Ed Ford   Ed Ford
Good afternoon Shari,

I like this image and the concept behind it. Capturing the deterioration of the walkway is a way to preserve what may be completely gone with another severe storm. This, to my mind, creates a link to the past. That is one way we, as photographers, can help people to remember so the past is not lost.

While, to my eye, it is a perfectly good stand alone as it is, and in agreement with Barbara, you might want to consider making this into a panorama for competition or simply to hand on a wall as I believe the panorama would highlight the deterioration still further making for a more dynamic image.

A very nice image Shari - thanks very much for sharing it with us.   Posted: 08/13/2026 16:47:13
Shari Garnsey   Shari Garnsey
Thank you Ed!   Posted: 08/13/2026 18:17:19



Kirsti Näntö-Salonen   Kirsti Näntö-Salonen
Hi Shari, you certainly captured the austere mood beautifully. I think that both the original and the panorama format work well. Another option might be to crop from the bottom and keep the dark cloud hanging over the scene. I think that it adds to the mood?   Posted: 08/14/2026 06:54:25
Shari Garnsey   Shari Garnsey
Thanks, Kirsti - I'll play with that too. Very helpful to have other peoples' eyes on this!   Posted: 08/14/2026 13:22:15



Steve Cole   Steve Cole
Shari, a nice capture of a pleasant moment. As suggested … Making it a bit more panoramic with cropping a bit off the bottom would enhance the overall view. I would probably light up the foreground grasses a bit to give my eye an area to start.
This is just nick picking for you have a nice image as presented   Posted: 08/24/2026 20:08:41



 

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