Jeff Manser  


Untitled by Jeff Manser

January 2025 - Untitled

January 2025 - Jeff Manser

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Albert Zabin   Albert Zabin
I think this is a wonderful photograph. I think it would beasmall improvement if you increased the texture of the rocks and lighten just a bit of the rock on the right to emphasize the three, as the dark rock retreats too much and weakens the pwer of the three body composition. There are some artifacts in the sky. I counted 11. These are only minor edits, except the artifacts will be very distracting when you enlarge the photo. Great shot.   Posted: 01/08/2025 22:05:05
Jeff Manser   Jeff Manser
Thanks for the insightful comments Albert.   Posted: 01/09/2025 03:59:40



Barbara Gore   Barbara Gore
Hi Jeff. I appreciate the simplicity of this image. The overcast sky and hint of fog create an otherworldly atmosphere. Great job minimizing distractions. I did notice some slight banding in the sky. The composition and crop are effective. The inclusion of 3 rock formations and 2 distinct tide pools, combined with the movement of water flowing up the beach on the right creates a good visual. One suggestion, if possible, would be to lift the shadows slightly on the rock in the lower left corner and add a bit more texture to the large rock on the right. Nice job.   Posted: 01/14/2025 16:00:04



 

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