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Lower Peak Timpanogus by Grace Cohen

July 2025 - Lower Peak Timpanogus

July 2025 - Grace Cohen

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Subject: Fall Foliage in Utah Mountain Weather
Location: Mt Timpanogus from Alpine Scenic Loop at American Fork, UT Shot: April 2025
Photographer: Grace Dunklee Cohen
Gear: Apple iPhone SE, Handheld, no filters
Edited in Lightroom Classic to bring back the “As Seen” look to this iPhone image that looked flat with a greenish cast.
It was my first time taking my photo buddy-best friend Sister to some of my favorite places in Utah. October 2023 gave us a fresh dusting of snow on the high peaks ??“ a perfect foil for the bright yellow aspen foliage. Not sure if the Alpine Scenic Loop would be open (or driveable) to take us the prettiest way to Sundance Ski Area, we took a chance on the high road and weren’t disappointed. We stopped many times to shoot on this drive, and once when we came over a rise, there was a most dramatic scene with intense warm and cool light ??“ but no place to park ??“ or even pull over. Instead of getting my “real” camera out, I put my flashers on and left the car in the travel lane, jumping out with my (old) iPhone SE. The original image had a greenish cast, so I had to do many selective edits using LRC’s many masking tools (sky, radial gradient, and brush) to bring this shot back to “as seen” quality. The sky was dark and foreboding, but with cracks of promising light showing through. This lower peak of Mt Timpanogus sported a fresh mantle of snow, and the aspens literally glowed warm orange-yellow in the cool light.
Wish I’d felt safer taking the time to get my real camera gear out, or at least specify RAW instead of JPG, as I may not have needed to make all of the spot adjustments to bring this shot back to “as seen”. But leaving a car in the roadway on a corner on a narrow, winding mountain pass isn’t the safest choice.
By the time I got back to the car, the drama had left the scene because the clouds closed in again, leaving the light dim and flat.


5 comments posted




Larry Treadwell   Larry Treadwell
Usually the aspens, with their yellow coats, make an image so vibrant it almost looks fake. But this images seems a bit flat. It may be due to your "green" tint or more likely the heavy overcast, dark and brooding sky. Personally I would start with the composition. The sky is the brightest part of the image and while it has some interest I would think the fall colors would be the greatest attraction. So I'd start with a crop from the left as I feel those upper detached leaves just look a bit odd and the then reduce the sky by cropping some off the top. I trying to reduce the bright area and bring more attention to the mountain. You might try adjusting the white balance using the eyedropper.

For me one of the keys to this image is the large pine tree near the center that is partly placed against the white clouds. If you could have either shot sooner or maybe a bit later so that the tree had a white cloud fully behind it, that green tree against a white cloud, in the center of the image would have been a real stunning centerpiece. Of course you would have to bring up the green of the tree. But the white balance should help.

I do really like the triangular peak framed by the aspen, just bring the aspen to life.

  Posted: 07/04/2025 20:08:14



Michael Jack   Michael Jack
Kudos for being brave enough to get this image. I mostly agree with Larry's comments except I would not crop in from the left. To my eye, the shadow on the mountain on the right appears dark for the scene. You might try to use the HighPass filter in PS (setting 30-35/overlay/?opacity) to bring out more contrast to address the flatness.   Posted: 07/04/2025 23:59:17



Barbara Gore   Barbara Gore
Hi Grace. I do the same thing - making quick stops along mountain roads while shooting, which isn't the safest habit lol. I usually keep my camera on my lap or the front seat just in case I round a corner and suddenly an amazing scene or wildlife appears. I really like this image. The stormy sky with dramatic white streaks and low hanging clouds add intrigue to the mountain peak. The bright yellow trees add a nice frame. I also agree with Larry's suggestion about the white balance and Michael's idea to increase the contrast or possibly try dehaze to add depth.   Posted: 07/12/2025 14:17:11



Grace Cohen   Grace Cohen
Thanks to all for your comments and suggestions! I've made 2 edited versions for your feedback:
- Edit 1 follows Larry and Michael's suggestions
- Edit 2 includes all above except the left-hand crop.
Thoughts??
PS - I took this road last week on the way down to Sundance Resort from Park City Utah for lunch with a friend. It was hot, pretty green & very sunny!   Posted: 07/22/2025 20:34:10
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Grace Cohen   Grace Cohen
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