Kaylyn Franks  


A Peek of the Sawtooths by Kaylyn Franks

September 2023 - A Peek of the Sawtooths

September 2023 - Kaylyn Franks

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"A Peek of the Sawtooths' was captured near Red Fish Lake in Central Idaho. I shot this with a Canon 60D, 14mm/f 2.8 Canon lens, ISO 100, f/22, 1/125 sec. I edited in LR, Color Effex Pro, PS & Topaz DeNoise. I could not get the sunflare out, so I replaced the sky in PS.


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5 comments posted




Joseph J Zaia   Joseph J Zaia
Kaylyn, I was not there so I am just speculating. You have a beautiful scene, but I feel it is spoiled by the foreground. I just wonder if there could be a different angle to capture more of the reflection than the foreground. You did a good job eliminating the lens flair, but they are not always a bad thing. I also wonder if you could have used the lens flair to your advantage. Using the original I cropped the foreground to get to the scene faster and toned down the bright spots and eliminated some distractions. I also straitened the tilt to the right and gave it a little Curves treatment.
I left the flair in as something different, but if you like anything that I did, you can do the same thing with the final.   Posted: 09/12/2023 15:02:28
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Kaylyn Franks   Kaylyn Franks
I like your suggestions and will play around with it.   Posted: 09/28/2023 14:40:24



Mike Patterson   Mike Patterson
I'm assuming this is an old beaver dam in the foreground. At any rate, Joe makes a good point that it spoils the image. Unfortunately, it looks kind of trashy. Perhaps a better shot would have been to walk past the debris and capture the pretty water, reflections in mountains in the background. (I've actually been to Red Fish Lake!)   Posted: 09/14/2023 09:33:45



Kaylyn Franks   Kaylyn Franks
Why does it not surprise me that you have been to Red Fish Lake!!!! It is a short 3 mile hike to this location. I will return one day and try a different composition.   Posted: 09/28/2023 14:42:20



Al Swanson   Al Swanson
I think the beaver dam is the subject of this beautiful scene. As such I would crop this down to just above the mountain top. Great color and composition. Good job!   Posted: 09/29/2023 13:56:41
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