About the Image(s)

Our photo club went on a downtown "walk about" Saturday. Given my previous issues with aperture, I looked for shots to check my camera's performance. I discovered that when I tried to adjust exposure by depressing +/- button and rotating back dial sometimes it didn't always work. The reason is that I released the button before turning the dial, which defaulted to changing the aperture. I think.
This photo was shot f10, ISO 500, 1/300 sec. at 125 mm.
In post processing, I cropped it to 4:5, erased a bright spot and a distracting label on the right beam, adjusted the curve to reduce highlights, masked and color corrected bright white hat to reduce its brightness, and masked the right face to add fill light.
I need ideas for alternative titles and any suggestions to improve this shot.