Russell Hunt
July 2024 - Here they are. Before and after.
Original
About the Image(s)
My granddaughter working on the balance beam.
Shot low looking up.
Raw converted in Lightroom.
FL 90mm@f5_1/160sec_auto ISO(3200). -.3 ev.
This round’s discussion is now closed!
5 comments posted
Your granddaughter as skill and made me think back to have fun but I would be scared to death of falling of. Posted: 07/10/2024 04:19:12
Hi Russell, I like the lowdown angle as it takes your eye to her face, which shows complete concentration, the crop has worked well as the original has a distracting background of people and lights,
I like the slight movement of her hand,showing an action shot, perhaps the removal of the gold coloured rope,would give more room in front of her face. Posted: 07/20/2024 11:04:52
I like the slight movement of her hand,showing an action shot, perhaps the removal of the gold coloured rope,would give more room in front of her face. Posted: 07/20/2024 11:04:52
The removal of the upper portion of the original makes us concentrate more on the figure and notice her concentration on the task. Posted: 07/23/2024 20:39:20
This works well as a portrait of your granddaughter and, hopefully, she'll appreciate the image and see how well she was concentrating.
I too find the rope in front of her distracting, as well as the background part of the wall going through her head. I appreciate though that it is often hard in these circumstances to get everything right as you just want to capture the moment. Posted: 07/24/2024 09:36:45
I too find the rope in front of her distracting, as well as the background part of the wall going through her head. I appreciate though that it is often hard in these circumstances to get everything right as you just want to capture the moment. Posted: 07/24/2024 09:36:45
It is good to adopt the lower angle and crop the unnecessary part. But the ropes at the background are a bit distracting to me. Posted: 07/28/2024 05:57:17