Rebecca Haugan
September 2023 - Pier in Wabasha
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About the Image(s)
Description: Taken at a pier in Wabasha of my brother. F/5.6, 1/125 sec., ISO-110, with a 55mm lens.
I've also attached the original.
4 comments posted
I'd love to see you brother facing toward the camera rather than away ! I see a sloping horizon line, can you straighten that out? There's a lot of reflected light here, it would be nice to add a layer mask and darken some of the sand, rocks and pier. I've never been to this town, it looks really quaint and nice; thank you for sharing this with us !! Posted: 09/10/2023 22:55:21
Your brother looks like he's deep in thought as he walks along but I think it would make more of a story if he was walking towards the camera or perhaps stopped and leaning over the railing so we get a profile of his face. This assumes he's a co-operative brother:) The street in the background is a good point of interest however the horizon would be better if it was straightened. Posted: 09/11/2023 19:35:47
Hello Rebecca, this images shows your brother deep in thought. Donna and Meredith both mentioned that the horizon needs to be straighten. It would be nice to see your brother's face but will the image mood be the same? Posted: 09/16/2023 06:24:04
I like your brother walking away. It lends a moodiness to the photo which I like. Posted: 09/18/2023 18:00:58