David Price, EPSA
About the Image(s)
The picture was taken at a Goth festival in Whitby, England. I have done a lot to the original including putting her in a different background, removing her crown, cloning her left eye to the right eye plus a few other things. Suggestions for a title would be welcome.
6 comments posted
Sophia Schade
for the title - She put a spell on me? I Love her smile and I like what you did so far. If it was my photo I would make the following changes.
1)I would fill in with hair where the Skin spot is by the end of the earing. 2)eyebrowns make both the same color the one to the right looks lighter 3)I like what you did with the left eye but it needs a bit clean up on the right corner 4)I have mixed feelings about the additional make up on her cheek. I hope I helped.   Posted: 01/04/2025 02:11:58
1)I would fill in with hair where the Skin spot is by the end of the earing. 2)eyebrowns make both the same color the one to the right looks lighter 3)I like what you did with the left eye but it needs a bit clean up on the right corner 4)I have mixed feelings about the additional make up on her cheek. I hope I helped.   Posted: 01/04/2025 02:11:58
David Price
Thanks for your comments Sophia. They have been acted upon.   Posted: 01/16/2025 10:42:48
Mark Burgess
Hi David Its an enchanting image suggesting a title "Enchantress" Something odd with her right eye but is that the real "her?" Definitely your edit improved the image. Agree with Sophia's comments too. The extra cheek makeup? She has an interesting cheek bone or maybe its her makeup but I think the original adds to the mystery of her persona so would be inclined to have the original.   Posted: 01/04/2025 03:41:39
Richard Siersma
David, I like what you have done with this young lady's appearance. I agree with Sophia's comments but I suggest adding more hair in the forehead area too. It looks like you did some skin softening on her right cheek (I like it) before adding the stronger makeup (not so sure about it). No name suggestions come to mind.   Posted: 01/04/2025 16:40:17
Victor Wasilov
David, I like what you have done with the background and removing the crown. I see why you made the makeup and skin tone more pleasant, but I think it would be more dramatic to have kept her makeup as in the original and enhance the ashen look of the white potions of her skin. It looks like she was going for a vampire look with the shading on booth cheeks creating a pale white death mask focusing attention on the sinister eyes (keeping the original right eye). Maybe calling her "Elvira".   Posted: 01/14/2025 15:52:42
David Price
Thanks for your suggestions. I like the name Elvira but have already used it for another image from the same shoot, but I may swap the names over.   Posted: 01/16/2025 10:50:37