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Canoe Row at Lake Galina John Kelly, Group 88 by John Kelly

January 2022 - Canoe Row at Lake Galina John Kelly, Group 88

January 2022 - John Kelly

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About the Image(s)

Taken in August 2021 @ 10am
Nikon D-750
ISO 250 F-16, 1/250Sec , 28mm Lens
Windows Photo Editor and Luminar AI
Enahanced photo with Luminar , lightened far shoreline,
Straighened photo shoreline.
Replaced sky and addes birds.
Sharpened overall image and detail enhancement.


7 comments posted




Rich James   Rich James
John, the focus of your piece is those marvelous, colorful canoes waiting for duty. I like how they present themselves to form a leading, curved line. A couple things you might consider to bring that out even more; erasing the taller vegetation that blocks the view of the boats, cropping to take out as much of the grass as possible, and toning down the sky and grass, for me its vividness overshadows the colors on the canoes. It's a great scene. Happy New Year to you!   Posted: 01/10/2022 19:22:52



John Kelly   John Kelly
Rich
Thank you for your review and recommendations for editing.
I'll have to see what I can do with what you have suggested.   Posted: 01/10/2022 21:49:01
John Kelly   John Kelly
I did some editing based on your recommendations.   Posted: 01/11/2022 07:30:53
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Louis Lo   Louis Lo
Hi John, I can see those canoes mooring along the curvy shore, like a "S" line, which maybe the best composition if shooting from the first canoe linkup to the end canoe.

  Posted: 01/11/2022 02:34:49
John Kelly   John Kelly
Hi Louis
I took several different compositions of the canoe line including the one you have recommended, but that one didn't give me a good perspective. But thank you for your review.
  Posted: 01/11/2022 07:07:14



Jerry Funk   Jerry Funk
(Groups 20 & 64)
I like the cropped version best and especially like the addition of the birds.   Posted: 01/17/2022 20:01:42



John Kelly   John Kelly
Hi Jerry
Thanks for your comments.   Posted: 01/18/2022 06:13:42



 

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