Jack Florence Jr  

Morning in the vineyard by Jack Florence Jr

August 2022 - Morning in the vineyard

About the Image(s)

I recently upgraded my phone to the iPhone 13 and am very pleased to see not only does the built in processing render mid day images well but also lower light images, with little extra processing needed.

I liked the early morning light in this scene, the dirt road as leading the viewer into the scene, and in the distance you can see the valley below which is filled with fog as is typical for summer mornings in California.

7 comments posted

Bob Shor   Bob Shor
I like the scene you chose to photograph and the way you used the trees to frame the valley. The side light on the right side of the image seems a little distracting to me (its drawing my eye out of the image a bit). Not sure if you could have avoided that by moving to the left a bit. Just curious if you shot this in RAW?   Posted: 08/03/2022 18:17:38

Jack Florence Jr   Jack Florence Jr
Thanks Bob, I had forgotten that's an option now, so no this wasn't shot as raw but will work on that.   Posted: 08/03/2022 18:46:52

Quang Phan   Quang Phan
I like your image with orange, red color of the dirt road lead to the valley. The fog in the background surprised me when I read description, I thought it is cloud or a pond. The highlight of orange color on the tree would be distracted viewer's eye. I would need an original image before processing to learn more how the phone naturally taken. Best regards,   Posted: 08/04/2022 20:18:33
Jack Florence Jr   Jack Florence Jr
Thank you Quang. Regarding the original, there were no edits.   Posted: 08/04/2022 20:21:21
Quang Phan   Quang Phan
Thanks Jack. Upgraded iphone 13 is nice   Posted: 08/06/2022 09:17:51

Ruth Holt   Ruth Holt
A lovely early morning scene. Looks like a nice place to go walking. Colors, lighting, and composition are very good. I'm impressed with this image because you didn't do any post processing. Looks like the iPhone 13 is great.   Posted: 08/10/2022 11:39:49

Gene Eckhardt   Gene Eckhardt
Like the composition a lot. The gap in trees draws me through the image with the layers of road, grapes, trees, fog, mountains ... Agree the brightness of the right side light a bit distracting, I would try darkening slightly with a brush. I like the sun ray. The entire image seems slightly out of focus. Since there are no other comments, perhaps it is my allergies.   Posted: 08/14/2022 15:15:14


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