Jeff Hanke  


Pier at Sunset by Jeff Hanke

January 2022 - Pier at Sunset

January 2022 - Jeff Hanke

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About the Image(s)

After I joined the group, I went down to a local pier as it was quite windy and waves were kicking up. I took shots from different angles at different stages of sunset. I decided to merge two shots, one with the birds flying over and one with the sun casting a shadow under the pier. I started by adjusting levels of the sunset shot, and then copied in the birds and blended them into the pic. Next I selected a sky replacement to add some dimension to the sky which was too flat. I used a mild Nik silver intensifier to help the pic pop. Lastly I saved as JPG in smaller format.

The first attachment is the finished BW, the second 2 are the shots I worked from.

A local PSA member friend of mine helped me with aspects of Adobe and NIK for this.

Anyway, I hope this is the sort of think you're looking for, and I’m within the boundaries for submission. I have other BW shots from further back, but this is what I could get done for a new pic in this timeframe. I look forward to exchanges with the group.


9 comments posted




Arne Skinlo   Arne Skinlo
Welcome to our group, Jeff! You have done a good job with the merging of pictures. The birds give life to the image and the clouds add drama. My suggestions for improvement is to crop the foreground so the horizon line become down to about 1/3 and darken the blue sky slightly to increase the tonal range.   Posted: 01/09/2022 02:15:02
Jeff Hanke   Jeff Hanke
Thanks Arne. Good suggestions. Ill play with this some more.   Posted: 01/10/2022 13:46:22



Tracy Szela   Tracy Szela
Nicely merged and edited image. I did like the colors of the sun and sky in the color version, but the B&W as you edited it is very interesting too. I like the textures in the sand and the angle of the pier.   Posted: 01/09/2022 11:33:00
Jeff Hanke   Jeff Hanke
Yes - agreed the lost colors take something away. Thanks for your comments.   Posted: 01/10/2022 13:47:19



Jeff Hanke   Jeff Hanke
Here is another attempt for comparison - thanks for the feedback - fun   Posted: 01/11/2022 11:30:29
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Don Hill   Don Hill
Hey Jeff, welcome to the group. I like both your submitted image and the one you redid above. The thing that impresses me the most is the sharpness. you can never go wrong with the sun behind a pier. Welcome again.   Posted: 01/13/2022 12:07:43
Jeff Hanke   Jeff Hanke
Thanks Don - much appreciated   Posted: 01/14/2022 19:40:18



Tevor Harvey   Tevor Harvey
Hi Jeff, welcome to the group. Until I read your explanation I hadn't realized that the birds were put in afterwards - super job. I'd agree with the crop of the foreground slightly and love the detail that you have in the waves and the pier. Cracking shot and conversion.
  Posted: 01/13/2022 12:46:16
Jeff Hanke   Jeff Hanke
Hi Trevor

I had one shot with the birds and another from that shoot with the light under the pier, so I blended in the birds. Nice little feature in photoshop. Thanks for your comments. Jeff   Posted: 01/14/2022 19:41:33



 

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