Frank St-Pierre
About the Image(s)
This photo is another in the series of migratory river crossing along the Mara river (Serengeti/Tanzania). Some
sections of the Mara river have high banks, so sometimes there's a jumper. With this shot, the subject is that jumper,
and his wild jump helps tell the story of how animals behave with levels of panic and terror while crossing. The
aesthetic I like in this shot are the contrasting elements: dusty trail/splashing water and rugged red river bank with
flat water. There were branches in foreground (see original), which were there in every darned shot because our jeep was
blocked in by other jeeps. But even if not blocked, a short duration of a crossing like this one wouldn't warrant
driving around for a better spot, although we've seen a crossing that lasted almost an hour, and our guide said he saw
one mega-herd that lasted from breakfast until dusk.
It was a bit overcast and my settings weren't optimal for freezing the jumper and a deep DOF, and had the jumper alerted
me of his intention maybe I could have zoomed in on him for this shot;)
Shot hand-held with Fuji Xt-3 and 50-140 f2.8 (+ 1.4x) at 70mm (35mm equiv=105mm), f/4, 1/800, using iso 160. Cropped to
keep the line of animals from edge to edge and from river bank to midstream. Boosted the red and dusty highlights,
lifted mids, sharpened and removed the offending branches.
The water's edge doesn't look horizontal because the river bank is not straight, and I'm wondering if that appears as a
flaw: should I apply some more transforms to get that waterline (along with the horizontal line midway up the river
bank) to be perfectly horizontal?
This round’s discussion is now closed!
6 comments posted
You are getting me really excited now. I should be in Mara in a week. You're right; the technical aspects could be better, but the image reflects the absolute panic of the scene and the animals' frantic lungeing into the river. The only quibble I have is with your title. I would have chosen "Airborne." (Sorry - my military background coming out.) That was a nice catch. Your cropping did a great job creating a bottom left to upper right diagonal. line.   Posted: 08/05/2022 11:24:37
This is an awesome shot! What a moment! Love how you cropped it and emphasized the reddish cliffs and dust! I agree with trying to sharpen the jumper with topaz. I don't think that the edge of the river needs leveling. Great job cloning out the branch. I cannot see any eviden ce that you did that, except of course that the branch was in the original. Great shot!!!   Posted: 08/28/2022 08:55:07