Jessica Manelis  


Donkey Tails by Jessica Manelis

October 2021 - Donkey Tails

About the Image(s)

My father has an incredible garden. Last month I was out at my parents house and walking around outside. He had these Donkey Tail succulents growing in a fountain. I loved the way they were draping off the fountain and the different lines they created. I shot this with my iPhone and enhanced the color a bit.


3 comments posted




Cindy Lynch   Cindy Lynch
You have remarkable clarity, detail and exposure in this image. The color is great, as well. Technically, well done. Compositionally, I might have liked a horizontal/landscape crop showing the bottom of the donkey tails and not as much of the fountain. Perhaps cropping down to show just a little of the concrete. As it is now, I am not sure if you wan me to focus on the plant or design of the fountain.   Posted: 10/11/2021 21:10:15



Marcela Stegemueller   Marcela Stegemueller
As beautiful and as interesting as the donkey tails are, my eyes keep looking at the leading lines of the fountain above them. You could almost have two pictures here -- the geometrical lines of the fountain and the luscious looking donkey tails. Perhaps you may consider converting picture into monochrome balancing the image.   Posted: 10/13/2021 14:32:18



Bob Crocker   Bob Crocker
Nice detail and color. Succulents make good subject matter. I like the lines of the fountain that flow well with plants but I agree with Cindy that showing the bottom of the donkey tails would strengthen the composition.   Posted: 10/15/2021 09:07:36



 

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