Butch Mazzuca  


Ready for Takeoff by Butch Mazzuca

November 2023 - Ready for Takeoff

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I almost never shoot insects but our local botanic garden had a butterfly exhibit - if you call a 20’ x 10’ 200 square foot room with about a dozen butterflies an exhibit - however, I was able to get this shot just below eye level in what looks like a B-52 readying for take off position. Anyway, it was a novelty and fun - Canon R5 - Tamron 90mm Macro ISO 1600 - f11 - 1/200th second for an off camera soft box my wife held about two fee from the subject. Not sure if this is competition worthy but would appreciate comments.


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8 comments posted




Zina Mirsky   Zina Mirsky
I'm novice enough to not understand the reference to "an off camera soft box" but I do understand the immediate likeness to a B-52 in takeoff position! I really appreciate the clarity, crispness, and exquisite colors of the subject and the immediate foliage. I swear that the butterfly is winking at you! An even tighter crop may remove some of the distraction of the lighter-colored foliage at the left pulling my eye away from the prize. As for calling the small space an 'exhibit', I would say yes, an immersive experience is indeed an 'exhibit'!   Posted: 11/12/2023 09:48:52
Butch Mazzuca   Butch Mazzuca
Thanks for your comments Zina - btw, an off camera softbox is simply a blast of light from a flash or strobe that is not affixed to your camera and is softened by a light modifier. Softening the light reduces harsh shadows and off camera light allows the photographer to light the subject from a different angle than head on.   Posted: 11/12/2023 10:27:02



Lori Azevedo   Lori Azevedo
Clarity, color, lighting, and subject framing are perfect. I love the the leaf the butterfly is standing on comes right at you also. Thank you for sharing.   Posted: 11/12/2023 11:29:13
Butch Mazzuca   Butch Mazzuca
Thanks Lori - it was fund trying to get the shot
  Posted: 11/12/2023 12:09:23



Alec Chester   Alec Chester
Very nice capture! Gorgeous butterfly! The only thing I would change would be to pull back the highlights on the body. Here is an attempt along with brightening the wings a bit.   Posted: 11/14/2023 16:53:20
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Butch Mazzuca   Butch Mazzuca
Thanks for the comment Alex, thanks for taking the time to respond

Butch
  Posted: 11/14/2023 18:15:02



Rick Taft   Rick Taft
Butch,
Interesting shot of a challenging subject. I agree with the others that it is a nice sharp image, especially for a 1/200 second shutter speed, and also for using a macro lens where a shallow depth of field often causes sharpness to drop off without resorting to image stacking. To my eye, the right wing (as I look at it) is a bit brighter and a bit sharper than the left one...perhaps because of where you placed your off-camera light? and possibly also because it is a little deeper into the field of view than the right wing (macro sharpness fall-off?). Alec managed to fix some of this difference with his visual feedback, but on the other hand sometimes a difference like this across the span of an image is a deliberate effect. Not sure in this case.

The only comment I have about your shot from the standpoint of competition: I would try not to have it cropped quite so dead-center if possible...even if the offset from center is just a little. And also, from the standpoint of a PSA competition in the Nature category, based on some PSA presentations made to our group last year. this image is what the judges would see as a "portrait" as opposed to a shot with two or more butterflies interacting somehow or actually doing something...a portrait shot is at a disadvantage in a category like this because it has a very limited "story" to tell and PSA rules favor the story. In a competition I would suggest entering it in a more general open category and skip "Nature."   Posted: 11/18/2023 10:59:43
Butch Mazzuca   Butch Mazzuca
Yes, I'm aware of PSA competition rules and I appreciate your advice, but I don't enter PSA competitions; I should have been clearer. Actually, I just wanted some feedback because I almost never shoot insects - in any event, if I were to judge this on a 10 point scale as a portrait (and it is a portrait) I'd give it an 8 - uneven lighting, too static and the subject isn't quite straight on and I wanted to see if others saw it the same way - I really appreciate you taking the time to comment.

Best,   Posted: 11/18/2023 12:50:44