Mary Ann Carrasco  


Wading by Mary Ann Carrasco

January 2022 - Wading

January 2022 - Mary Ann Carrasco

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About the Image(s)

I took this in November where birds migrate near where I live. It was a very overcast day and the setting as well as the textures seem to make this image a good candidate for monochrome. I used siver efex pro in the Nik collection to edit. I am interested to see if the group thinks the composition and exposure work.

I used the Nikon d500 with the tamron 150-600 lens. The shutter speed was 1/2000; f/6.3; 600mm ISO 100.


6 comments posted




Cindy Lynch   Cindy Lynch
I love the reflection and dark reeds sticking up from the pond. The goose being centered in the frame, makes the composition feel stati. I do like that he is looking into the frame, though. For my taste, the photo and especially the goose, is too dark. As I went to lighten it in Photoshop, I thought it would make a wonderful high key image. See what you think.   Posted: 01/06/2022 09:33:50
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Mary Ann Carrasco   Mary Ann Carrasco
Cindy, thank you for your comments and edit. I do like the high key effect and the crop on the left takes the bird out of the center.   Posted: 01/11/2022 04:51:35



Chuck Carstensen   Chuck Carstensen
Making it high key is better as is cropping out the reeds on the left. Giving the bird some room to move forward adds interest. It might work as a square crop. Yes, the bird needs more detail as Cindy has done. An interesting subject to photograph.   Posted: 01/06/2022 10:40:41
Mary Ann Carrasco   Mary Ann Carrasco
Thank you, Chuck. I do like the high key effect and will try out a square crop.   Posted: 01/11/2022 04:52:25



Lorna Zaback   Lorna Zaback
Mary Ann, I like your BW conversion of this image from the original - bringing out more of the detail in the feathers was a good call while keeping the interesting abstract look of the reflection. I do like Cindy's crop and lighter, more high key look.   Posted: 01/12/2022 09:12:50



Paul Moertl   Paul Moertl
Your conversion from the original is considerably better. Some of the detail is missing, though, such as the area at the tail. Otherwise a good conversion.   Posted: 01/16/2022 16:37:03



 

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