Tom Carnahan  


Old Pier by Tom Carnahan

October 2021 - Old Pier

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Sunrise on the OLD PIER. The shot was taken to work the leading lines and liked the exposure and colors with the sun just above the horizon. Look forward to comments and critiques.


8 comments posted




Robert Schleif   Robert Schleif
(Group 42)
I like the multiple lines leading into the interestingly shaped structure. To me, it looks like the orangeness of the image has been pushed a little too far.   Posted: 10/03/2021 18:26:06



Jon Joyce   Jon Joyce
The terminal and track, the focus of the photo, are someway subdued by the lovely sky. The terminal and some track brightened, would strengthen the subject of the capture.   Posted: 10/05/2021 18:14:52



Leonid Shectman   Leonid Shectman
Great picture, multiple leading lines.   Posted: 10/06/2021 00:33:47



Jody Coker   Jody Coker
Interesting photo and my favorite time of the day, you defiantly have leading lines. I tend to agree with Jon and would like to see it road-surface and the terminal just a tad bit lighter. See what you think here   Posted: 10/07/2021 18:36:01
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Judy Merson   Judy Merson
As all have said nice leading lines with the pier roadway and its line of lamps
But the lines lead to a dark structure and the sun pulls our eye away from the leading lines.
I would remove the sun and lighten the building as Jon and Jody recommended   Posted: 10/09/2021 01:11:35



Jessica Manelis   Jessica Manelis
Love the leading lines as well. I agree with Jody, it would be nice to brighten up the building a little because it looks so interesting I would want to know what my eye is leading up to. It is not too orange for me. I like it because I think it just enhances the time of day. Where is this pier?   Posted: 10/11/2021 12:36:26
Judy Merson   Judy Merson
I Googled and this is St. Pete Pier It has had many shapes since 1800   Posted: 10/15/2021 19:54:17



Dorinda Wills   Dorinda Wills
i agree with the others. I think you need to decide what your subject is: the sunset or the pier. I would chose the pier, myself. Brighten and enhance our view of it, adjust the sky accordingly although I do think it is beautiful as it is.   Posted: 10/11/2021 15:15:36



 

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