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September 2021 - Anges van der Logt

Original

September 2021 - Anges van der Logt

Original 2

About the Image(s)

Photo taken in early morning in West Java. Have two versions (muted colours and BW), not sure which one I like better. Probably I like the BW better, as it is more simple, and I flipped the image in this one, to try to make a stronger composition.

What do you all think?


9 comments posted




Belinda Hudnall Keller   Belinda Hudnall Keller
The original and final are better to me. I believe I prefer the final BW, though, for the grasses in the water. There is almost a glistening effect there. If you go with the original colored version, I would saturate the red in the boats and remove the debris along the edge. A vignette might help disguise that too.   Posted: 09/05/2021 17:23:26
Anges van der Logt   Anges van der Logt
Thanks Belinda for your feedback. Certainly will try your suggestions.   Posted: 09/22/2021 22:31:11



Mervyn Hurwitz   Mervyn Hurwitz
Definitely prefer the black and white version and I agree that the flip makes for a stronger composition. I would like to see a little more contrast in the boat to bring out the blacks.   Posted: 09/10/2021 15:21:10
Anges van der Logt   Anges van der Logt
Thanks Mervyn.. It is always a matter of personal taste I realise. But yes, I somehow also prefer the BW version. Will try to give the image more contrast and see how that comes out. Thanks.   Posted: 09/22/2021 22:32:34



Jose Cartas   Jose Cartas
I agree with your decision to flip the image, because it's more pleasant to the view. I wouldn't change anything in terms of composition, since all elements work well here. I'm undecided between the color and the B&W versions. In the B&W photo I would lightly increase the contrast. The color version is almost monochromatic (which should favor a B&W treatment), but it produces a more somber mood. As suggested by Belinda, saturating the reds in the boat should improve the color (flipped) picture.   Posted: 09/10/2021 19:54:48
Anges van der Logt   Anges van der Logt
Thanks Jose. Will try to increase the saturation of the reds of the boats, and flip the color image as well, to see if I like it more than the BW. Thanks for the feedback!   Posted: 09/22/2021 22:34:02



Bob Benson   Bob Benson
As Jose states, I am torn between the two versions. There is not much color, but the blue tones do add a bit of drama. Flipping it was a big improvement.   Posted: 09/22/2021 18:37:46
Anges van der Logt   Anges van der Logt
Thanks Bob. Yes I agree that I like the flipped version more. Also not too sure about which image I like most, BW or color.. ;) Thanks for the feedback.   Posted: 09/22/2021 22:34:50



Tony Au Yeong   Tony Au Yeong
I like the B&W and flipped image. The calm water and the foggy background help to create a feeling of tranquility. The foreground, the boats and the background add dimension to this nice image.   Posted: 09/25/2021 10:28:16



 

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