Paul McLaughlin  


Wash Back Jameson Distillery by Paul McLaughlin

May 2021 - Wash Back Jameson Distillery

May 2021 - Paul McLaughlin

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About the Image(s)

This is an older image I took while in Ireland a few years ago. When I look at it I see many flaws but I am drawn to it. There is an emotional reason as well. My grandfather worked in this plant at about the time these machines were installed. He worked on the floor above sweeping barley across the warm floor to prepare it far the distilling process. I love the colors and the vibrancy but wish I had spent more time on the angles and composition. Taken at ISO 500, 1.17 at f22/41.5mm


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6 comments posted




Stuart Caine   Stuart Caine
(Group 42)
A very nice image. I liked the way you cropped and darkened the image .The picture is clear and sharp.   Posted: 05/07/2021 11:29:59



Tom McCreary   Tom McCreary
Thank you for telling us the story of this image. I like the perspective that shows the height and size of the tanks. It looks to me that the original image is different from the image presented. I like it better, and cropped in some.   Posted: 05/14/2021 11:01:54
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Rich Sears   Rich Sears
Your story was a nice added touch Paul. I also prefer the original image. The composition is clearer. Sharp and colorful. If I may I would suggest changing the aspect ration to 4 x 5 and cropping up from the bottom. To me, the light grey walls are distracting. Overall, Paul,very nice capture.   Posted: 05/23/2021 15:13:33



Barbara Mallon   Barbara Mallon
I stared playing with cropping and came up with something very close to Tom's. I think all the angles and colors fit better in it. Your story is a wonderful addition. I hope they gave you a sample of the brew!   Posted: 05/23/2021 17:47:41



Tony Tam   Tony Tam
The grey wall on front is too big. It affect my sight. I would cutoff most of them. I more like the original as tom's version.   Posted: 05/29/2021 12:43:26
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Paul, it is a heart touch story photo, I like how you present the photo and also think Tony's suggestion is more good add.   Posted: 05/30/2021 05:10:03