Linda M Medine  


Old Clock by Linda M Medine

February 2021 - Old Clock

February 2021 - Linda M Medine

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About the Image(s)

I took this image on a Camera Club Field Trip. This clock was on the outside of a old bank building. I was taking it at an angle. I tried to make the correction on the lines. I used three textures.


9 comments posted




Witta Priester   Witta Priester
An interesting enough clock. The textures do add a feeling of "old"
To me, the areas where the clock ends and the textures begin seem haphazard, and perhaps the clock could be transformed to be rounder.   Posted: 02/04/2021 17:35:19
Linda M Medine   Linda M Medine
I do see what you are talking about. Thank you for helping me. I can do better.   Posted: 02/05/2021 12:11:19
Witta Priester   Witta Priester
Linda, please post an updated image in the comments, if you get a chance. I am looking forward to seeing what you do.   Posted: 02/05/2021 14:15:24



Linda M Medine   Linda M Medine
Redo of the old clock. Thank you Witta. I hope this is a like better. Please critique anyone.   Posted: 02/06/2021 12:56:21
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Connie Reinhart   Connie Reinhart
As a fan of fantasy fiction, this image really appeals to me. The distortion of the circle just adds mystery. I can see what Witta meant in the area from about 4:00 to 8:00. Some of the clock's frame is missing. The second version is almost another image. The background is very red, perhaps a warning that time is getting short. The clock face is clearer. I like both versions.   Posted: 02/10/2021 12:52:12



Mary Hinsen   Mary Hinsen
Hi Linda - I too like both versions, for different reasons. I think I prefer your redo in terms of fine art - it really tells a story. I am intrigued by it, look further, and there is an air of mystery and danger :)   Posted: 02/10/2021 13:42:09



Linda M Medine   Linda M Medine
Thank you for the feedback.   Posted: 02/10/2021 20:49:08



Denise McKay   Denise McKay
I find I like your first image more than the second. With a bit of distortion to the clock and some of the frame fading away, I imagine how one could be "losing time". Like this clock is being sucked away into another world.

I think this is more about understanding the intent from the artist's perspective or the story one is trying to tell. I feel the first image tells a better story than your second edit that you posted.   Posted: 02/21/2021 10:13:05



Georgianne Giese   Georgianne Giese
I too prefer the first image. The distortion of the shape and the missing ditties between 4 and 8 are all due to the perspective of the photographer looking up at the clock. They are natural. To me, the texture over the clock and the shape say "antique" and "history". I like that.   Posted: 02/24/2021 10:56:00



 

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