Mary Hinsen, BPSA  


Remembering by Mary Hinsen, BPSA

November 2019 - Remembering

November 2019 - Mary Hinsen, BPSA

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My image this month is one of my father in law. I took some time considering whether to submit it because I am undecided whether it would be defined as fine art. It is not documentary- I have definitely worked to interpret the image in a way that I hope conveys a feeling, an idea, an emotion, a story. I have removed distracting elements from the surroundings, and added artistic accents. Is it fine art?

Opa Jack, as we call him, was sitting in a chair one evening, and he asked me to find his old guitar. Now 93 years old, he is blind and deaf, so he played it by feel. He started talking about his experiences in the war, and how much he missed his wife. I picked up my camera while he was talking, but the unposed, unlit images were not great!

I had a picture in my mind of how I wanted the image to look. Real, but with a hint of the era he was immersed in.

I worked on depth and contrast using curves. I then converted a copy to black and white and used this at low opacity to further enhance depth. I used Analog Efex to add a subtle glass plate border and light leak. I then did some colour grading to tone the image overall, so that the light leak worked with the toning of the subject.

I look forward to everyone's comments :)


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8 comments posted




Georgianne Giese   Georgianne Giese
Mary, I would say that this is fine art photography. We'll wait for the group to reply on that score.

It would seem that there are at least three categories of "fine art": 1. Mostly realistic scenes of unusual appeal; 2. Scenes made to look like paintings; 3. Abstracts and composites of artistic merit.

Most of this month's submittals have been of type 1.

Your image is beautiful, in my opinion. I'd consider it worthy of hanging in someones living room!   Posted: 11/06/2019 10:32:46



Georgianne Giese   Georgianne Giese
I love the work that you did to take a good image and turn it into a great image! the light leak is a really nice touch, as are the subtle tweaks to produce the muted colors, which add to the mood of the image. The story you produced with this image, is very impacting, in my opinion.

I don't know if you are aware of this, but I'll post it here in case others are not. I just learned of this myself a couple months ago. You can place a BW adjustment layer over your layer(s), change its blending mode to Luminance, and adjust the sliders to mute selected colors. You can also place a Selected Color adjustment layer over your layer(s), and adjust the Neutral and Black layers to do something similar.   Posted: 11/06/2019 13:52:59



Georgianne Giese   Georgianne Giese
I love the work that you did to take a good image and turn it into a great image! the light leak is a really nice touch, as are the subtle tweaks to produce the muted colors, which add to the mood of the image. The story you produced with this image, is very impacting, in my opinion.

I don't know if you are aware of this, but I'll post it here in case others are not. I just learned of this myself a couple months ago. You can place a BW adjustment layer over your layer(s), change its blending mode to Luminance, and adjust the sliders to mute selected colors. You can also place a Selected Color adjustment layer over your layer(s), and adjust the Neutral and Black layers to do something similar.   Posted: 11/06/2019 13:53:02



 
I love this image .. it does tell a story in a way that he's passing away time , strumming away .. maybe waiting for a loved one to return back home , or he's had a big feed and wants a bit of alone ' me time ' with his guitar and who knows , maybe a beer or two c   Posted: 11/06/2019 15:18:57



 
I too like this image and the story it tells. As for the type of fine art we might focus on, I agree that no. 1 of the three ideas presented by Georgianne is what I like. And this image is a good representation of that.   Posted: 11/06/2019 15:58:18



 
So wonderful to have captured this special moment; it does seem memorable. I think you have come a long way in the processing, and I especially love the added light leak on the guitar. There are some more things that I tried to try to make the photo stronger, see the attached. For this version the top of the hat is darker so as to help focus to the subject. The coloring was shifted with a turq-sepia lut in PS, applied to all but the hands, face and light leak, all of which were warmed a bit to provide some complementary color. I also cropped the right side and added a bit of space to the left of Opa Jack, using content -aware fill.   Posted: 11/08/2019 21:29:33
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Bunny Laden   Bunny Laden
(Group 43)
In my opinion, the image is artistic and conveys a strong story. The adjustments you made draw my eye to his intense concentration. I like the angle of the pose and how you captured the position of his hands. It is obvious to me that the guitar is his old friend! For me, the light leak adds to the artistic flare of the image. Nice job!   Posted: 11/17/2019 12:01:41



Connie Reinhart   Connie Reinhart
Everyone in your family will want a copy of this lovely portrait of Opa Jack. There are times when music so surrounds you that the rest of the world goes away. The musician feels it, but the observer may be totally unaware. You have captured that moment. I'd like to say that your processing was perfect, but Witta made some nice improvements. As to types of fine art, perhaps we pick what we like based on how we feel that day.   Posted: 11/28/2019 20:47:39