Judy Murphy  


Menemsha by Judy Murphy

November 2020 - Menemsha

November 2020 - Judy Murphy

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Taken at dusk in the tiny fishing village Menemsha with the last of its remaining fleet.
Sony with 16-35mm lens at 34mm f11 at 1/4 sec ISO 100.
Edited in Lightroom.


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6 comments posted




Pierre Williot   Pierre Williot
Lovely scene. Nice guiding lines and soft colors. Reminds me of the shores of Nova Scotia.
I would have like to see a little more sky.   Posted: 11/15/2020 16:15:38



Lamar Nix   Lamar Nix
Well thought out and executed image captures the detail and freshness of this seaport. Image appears to be a bit stronger and centered - to my eye - if cropped just inside the post on the right side.   Posted: 11/16/2020 18:59:16



Kathryn Engle
A very nice scene. I love the colors in the sky and it's reflection on the water. The composition of the boats and pier takes my view from the bottom and around the pier to the boats. Only minor suggestion is perhaps having a tiny more space to left of left pole.   Posted: 11/18/2020 13:17:50



Frans Gunterus   Frans Gunterus
Hi Judy, I love how you compose the leading lines towards left. The yellow lines of fish cages is complementing to the whole scene. I agree with Kathryn for having a little bit of space left to the left pole. However, I can fully understand you are losing part of the left image as a result of geometric adjustment to make the pole straight. IMHO, removing the two right poles on the right makes the image more appealing. Nice shot Judy.   Posted: 11/18/2020 19:49:09
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Judy Murphy   Judy Murphy
Nice version Frans. The negative space without the pole seems to add impact. I had thought it needed the third pole to keep some rhythm.   Posted: 11/27/2020 08:56:29



Todd Paige   Todd Paige
Hi Judy,

I think the adjustment you did really made the boats more prominent and improved the feeling that I am at the harbor. Also, I do not think the idea of the lobster traps on the pier is diminished at all. I think I would also agree with removing the pole but that seems to leave a lot of empty water so maybe cropping a bit of the Right ( to 8x10?)
Todd   Posted: 11/24/2020 21:20:26