Karl Hokanson, EPSA  


Untitled by Karl Hokanson, EPSA

October 2018 - Untitled

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Karl Hokanson   Karl Hokanson
Nikon Df, 1/125 @f10. 70 - 200 2.8   Posted: 10/09/2018 21:55:23



Bruce Benson   Bruce Benson
Karl, great job of panning, the car is super sharp and great exposure. My only suggestion is that the car is pretty centered, so a little more room on the left might be useful. Bruce   Posted: 10/23/2018 19:10:00



 
Your panning technique is spot on … the car is very sharp. The DOF is shallow enough to make the car pop from the background.

I agree that the car might be a little too centered in the frame. I offer this crop as another option to consider. I was try to split the frame 1/3 to 2/3 vertically.   Posted: 10/27/2018 21:00:06
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Bruce Benson   Bruce Benson
I think your crop is a nice improvement, good eye. Bruce   Posted: 10/30/2018 12:39:09



Gerald Emmerich Jr   Gerald Emmerich Jr
I like the panning and sharp moving racecar; I like the blur of the grass in the foreground; and I like the color combination. I also like Joe's crop. (It's unfortunate that the spoiler merges with the tire wall in the background, but that's a very minor negative.)
I think the pictorial aspects give this a good chance for acceptance in internationals.   Posted: 10/31/2018 00:17:17