Miriam Power  


Untitled by Miriam Power

May 2022 - Untitled

About the Image(s)

I don't do many studio shoots but my friend wanted company on this one. Jade was only after getting the robe and wanted to see how it looked. I tried getting a bit of movement and drama but still, let the robe speak for itself. I know I shot it on my Canon 70D & think it was a 50mm lens.


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9 comments posted




Tom Pickering   Tom Pickering
You definitely captured motion in the robe and the nude is tastefully done.

I would suggest brightening her eyes and mouth to help the viewer connect with her more. Thoughts?   Posted: 05/24/2022 12:35:24
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Miriam Power   Miriam Power
Thanks Tom. A bit of brightness definitely helps but maybe not that much   Posted: 05/24/2022 13:03:02
Tom Pickering   Tom Pickering
You felt it was too much? I thought it was just a subtle change.   Posted: 05/24/2022 13:55:01
Miriam Power   Miriam Power
I guess it's not that much. I think because I know her I was seeing the memory   Posted: 05/24/2022 14:15:09
Tom Pickering   Tom Pickering
That's something the viewer has no frame of reference for. d;¬{D   Posted: 05/24/2022 14:24:02



 
This is well done and I like the motion in the robe. Tom's brightening does help draw attention to the face.   Posted: 05/24/2022 16:17:37



Rusty Pinckney   Rusty Pinckney
The superb motion of the robe sets the stage for anticipation of more movement.The color is rich and perfect. No need to change her face from the original since I think Tom's change is very subtle.   Posted: 05/25/2022 14:11:23



Brian Chen   Brian Chen
When comaparing the orignal vs Tom's version side by side, I still like the original more. The eye balls in the orgiinal image is a bit darker, and easy to catch viewer's attention.   Posted: 05/25/2022 23:24:53



Arabella Dane   Arabella Dane
I prefer the original too.   Posted: 05/27/2022 10:24:12