Chuck Carstensen  


Minion and Fruit by Chuck Carstensen

September 2020 - Minion and Fruit

September 2020 - Chuck Carstensen

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About the Image(s)

Made this image originally in color for the PSA 365 Gallery. Then, for submission to this Digital Dialog Group I thought it might fit as a monochrome. What do you think? Converted to Black and White in Luminar 4 and finished in Photoshop Elements. Original shot with a Fujifilm XPro2, 23mm lens, ISO 3200, 1/160. f/4, available light.



4 comments posted




David Price   David Price
I prefer the colour version because the different colours of the various fruit make them stand out. If you want to go with the mono I would clone out the burnt out areas on the grapes, add a little more contrast and some texture to the bananas.   Posted: 09/07/2020 07:54:08



David Price   David Price
  Posted: 09/07/2020 08:00:29
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Cindy Lynch   Cindy Lynch
I agree with David's changes. I like both the color and mono versions, but I wonder why you have the minion in there. I think you would have a nicer still life without it. Once the highlights are toned down, you have a nice tonal range.   Posted: 09/07/2020 12:32:58



Chuck Carstensen   Chuck Carstensen
Thanks for comments. I just added Spencer, or whatever his name is, just for fun. I do agree with comments. Also, I like the color version best and will make a print someday.
  Posted: 09/07/2020 13:39:01



 

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