Sunandan Ghosh  

Work in progress by Sunandan Ghosh

August 2019 - Work in progress

About the Image(s)

Camera: Canon EOS 600D. Location: Langalpota, a brick field, about 25 Km away from Kolkata.

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7 comments posted

Art Jacoby   Art Jacoby
I think that this tells a nice story and captures a slice of life and there there are interesting patterns, textures and shapes. For me, cropping more tightly. increasing the contrast and bringing out more detail in the shadows would make this an even stronger image.   Posted: 08/09/2019 13:43:32
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Sunandan Ghosh   Sunandan Ghosh
Hi Art, Thanks with a request. Please post your suggestions in 1024 x 768/ 683 format. It helps me viewing the details in larger screens.   Posted: 08/10/2019 07:10:40

Marge Barham   Marge Barham
Sunandan, interesting photo. I like the repetition of the cement blocks. I like what Art did to create more detail but I am not happy with his cropped version.   Posted: 08/11/2019 20:18:35

Gerhard Geldenhuys   Gerhard Geldenhuys
great shot and very interesting patterns. Nice composition and a good exposure.   Posted: 08/15/2019 01:21:22

Gabriele Dellanave   Gabriele Dellanave
Sunandan I think you have an excellent shot year. The story is well told, the action is in full view, patterns, texture, exposure everything very dynamic. My only reserve is on the converging lines that are taking the viewer eyes out of the photogram. I do not know, maybe I'm wrong you do not give us the camera details, but I think that a wider focal length cold reduce that effect.   Posted: 08/17/2019 22:44:14

Sunandan Ghosh   Sunandan Ghosh
Thank you Gabriele. Here I used Canon EOS 600d with 18mm-200 mm Canon Lens. Initially I thought to crop it from the top. Later on I decided to wait for the suggestions from my PSA friends.   Posted: 08/18/2019 14:19:16

Kerstin Köneke   Kerstin Köneke
Hi Sunandan, I agree with the others, this is a fine photo with all the patterns and textures. I struggled also with the cropping from Art, but it would be for me to give the background figure a head or cutting it complete.   Posted: 08/30/2019 13:11:26