Lauren Heerschap  


Welcome Spring by Lauren Heerschap

April 2021 - Welcome Spring

About the Image(s)

This was taken in a park near the airport in Seattle. ISO 200, f2.8, 1/3200 on a macro lens 60mm. Welcome Spring!


4 comments posted




Jon Allanson   Jon Allanson
This is a simple shot of the twigs with the flower buds bursting, set against a complimentary diffuse out of focus background. I am not sure we need the twig on the lower right, it draws attention away from the main twigs. I would have preferred a little more room around the top right bud, and the bit of bud intruding on the stem bottom left corner cropping off.   Posted: 04/10/2021 05:26:49



Becca Cambridge   Becca Cambridge
Oh, It's that time of year! We made it! Yeah!
The background is good at accentuating the buds.
As far as post processing, this group has been educated in removing items along the border that might be distracting. with that knowledge, I might edit out the buds along the bottom. With those lower buds out, not sure if the right twig adds anything.
I like the diagonal line from lower left to upper right.
Thanks for sharing a bit of spring with us.   Posted: 04/11/2021 10:22:53



Jan van Leijenhorst   Jan van Leijenhorst
I like the diagonal composition and the contrast between subject and background. I would suggest cropping part of the bottom and deleting the twig in the right lower corner.   Posted: 04/12/2021 14:06:04



Jan van Leijenhorst   Jan van Leijenhorst
I like the diagonal composition and the contrast between subject and background. I would suggest cropping part of the bottom and deleting the twig in the right lower corner.   Posted: 04/12/2021 14:06:04



 

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