Priscilla Farrell  

Untitled by Priscilla Farrell

March 2023 - Untitled

About the Image(s)

This month is a continuation of the February submission Same subject only a different version. Here my subject is focused primarily on the glass globes of the staircase with sun and shadows. I straightened the composition and removed highlights from the globes.

Technical information: Google Pixel 3 @ f1.8, 1/2933, ISO 54

This round’s discussion is now closed!
7 comments posted

Laura Lee Bartholomew   Laura Lee Bartholomew
Another great version of this subject. Your composition is very effective. To my eye, the image needs additional straightening, it seems to angle inwards at the top on both sides. I used the skew tool in PS to pull the top edges outward. I also darkened the bright highlights, and added some contrast to give the image a bit more POP. Did any of this improve the image?   Posted: 03/01/2023 18:35:45
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Priscilla Farrell   Priscilla Farrell
I agree with the changes you made particularly the straightening of the sides. I did not take it far enough, your version is an improvement!   Posted: 03/02/2023 07:21:40

Glenn Rudd   Glenn Rudd
I love this composition. It is harmonius and features brilliant and attractive glass globes. Well done!   Posted: 03/02/2023 11:29:57

Sheldon Wecker   Sheldon Wecker
I like the bright colors. I agree with Laura Lee's edits.   Posted: 03/08/2023 21:00:32

Joe Norcott   Joe Norcott
The colors make this photo. Laura Lee's edit does make a difference to the angle. I still prefer the photo from last month.   Posted: 03/12/2023 19:08:35

John Hackett   John Hackett
A good variation on last months picture. I like both, or though if pushed I would go for this version.I just like the cheerfulness of the picture, well seen.   Posted: 03/15/2023 07:55:54

Suzanne Daunt   Suzanne Daunt
I agree with Laura's comment regarding straightening the lines of the building; her image looks a bit sharper maybe due to changing contrast. Still, this is a great photograph - like the composition and colors!   Posted: 03/15/2023 11:30:11