Jim Bodkin, APSA, PPSA  


Old Palouse Homestead by Jim Bodkin, APSA, PPSA

November 2019 - Old Palouse Homestead

November 2019 - Jim Bodkin, APSA, PPSA

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About the Image(s)


While at the recent PSA Spokane Conference, we ventured into the Palouse region, knowing that our normal nature subjects would be difficult to find, yet wanting to expand into new areas. This agricultural region is noted for the dramatic rolling hills with patchwork fields and rustic gems of abandoned buildings, one of which I chose for my subject this month. The setting with dramatic clouds and semi filtered light caught my eye, but because of the shadows, I knew shooting in HDR would assist me in balancing the light. The building was posted with no trespassing signs, so I was limited to shooting from a public road, although I would have preferred shooing upward at a closer distance to make the building more dramatic.

I captured the images with a Canon 7D mk2 and Tamron 16-300mm zoom lens at 35mm, 1/800 sec, f/10, ISO 400 (because I was hand holding) the 3 shot sequence at -2/0/+2 stops was imported into Lightroom then processed in Aurora 2019 using standard presets to emphasize the contrast and textures, then re-imported back to Lightroom for straightening, minor cropping and conversion to B&W.

I tried to keep the feeling of the original image and and bring out details, yet not go over the top with the HDR effect. Was I successful? How could it be improved?


This round’s discussion is now closed!
12 comments posted




 
I really like what you did. I can't tell you how to change your photo. I do wonder if you like the space on the left where the tress end and the sky shows?   Posted: 11/04/2019 11:06:44
Jim Bodkin   Jim Bodkin
Thanks, Donna. Regarding the trees on the left, I was trying to hold true to what I saw in a documentary sense, but agree that I could have cropped them tighter with no loss of story.   Posted: 11/26/2019 23:21:00



 
Excellent image Jim! It has so much detail in the house and then the added curves, line and dramatic sky. This image makes me wonder if the old outhouse will sink rather than just fall over. Great work!   Posted: 11/04/2019 17:21:34
Jim Bodkin   Jim Bodkin
Thanks, Sharron. The lines and curves were fantastic.

BTW, that building is actually a chicken coop. The outhouse was in between the two structures, but showing it ruined the flow of the composition and the house then blocked the trees and fields. So this version is sans outhouse.
  Posted: 11/26/2019 23:29:01



Jim Hagan   Jim Hagan
I much prefer the mono version. The tonal range is great as is the composition. I have no suggestions.   Posted: 11/18/2019 14:51:52
Jim Bodkin   Jim Bodkin
Thanks, Jim.
  Posted: 11/26/2019 23:29:37



Lisa Hlavinka   Lisa Hlavinka
The Palouse area is such fantastic place to go do photography! We have been there a few times. I really like the monochrome version of this image. It brings out all of the natural and man-made textures and has great impact. Excellent image.   Posted: 11/19/2019 21:10:21
Jim Bodkin   Jim Bodkin
Thanks, Lisa. It was our first visit to the area, after seeing images of it for years. We got caught up with it and actually visited on three different days, including one with snow.
  Posted: 11/26/2019 23:33:59



Allen Tucker   Allen Tucker
Shapes, lines, patterns, textures, and mood - any one of these elements can be a successful subject for black-and-white and you got them all in one photograph. Great shot!   Posted: 11/19/2019 21:51:25
Jim Bodkin   Jim Bodkin
Thanks, Allen. The subject matter is obviously there, just waiting for the capture. The main problem was finding a place to pull over and photograph.
  Posted: 11/26/2019 23:36:29



Tom Pickering   Tom Pickering
(Groups 0 & 53)
This, for me, has two subjects that compete a bit for our attention - the sky and the buildings. I love both, but think, considering the title, that you gave too much of the composition to the sky which has loads of drama.

I cropped a bit from the top and left, putting the house in a stronger position I think. What about you?   Posted: 11/21/2019 15:54:25
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Jim Bodkin   Jim Bodkin
Great suggestion, Tom. I like your crop.

I was trying for a more environmental shot to establish place, solitude, and desolation. But as you say, the title should change to reflect that.

I was worried that I was making the house too HDR-ish. Your thoughts?

Thanks.   Posted: 11/26/2019 23:41:24