Asmar Murad  


A Girl with a Kite by Asmar Murad

April 2021 - A Girl with a Kite

About the Image(s)

A Girl with a kite is a Street Photograph made recently. It is part of a photography series that I’m planning to do as a documentary project.


6 comments posted




Pinaki Sarkar   Pinaki Sarkar
Interesting minimalist Shot. I would prefer the horizon to be a straight line and maybe a tighter crop. But that just me ...the idea of this shot is inherently godd.   Posted: 04/05/2021 08:39:41
Asmar Murad   Asmar Murad
Thank you for your comments. I don't know how I missed the horizon light. Attached a corrected one   Posted: 04/05/2021 15:14:41
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Snehendu Kar   Snehendu Kar
I love this shot very much- both for its subject and the overall execution. My past 20 years of professional work has been on "Empowerment of Women". This image captures the essence of empowerment-"a flight of freedom". I hope Asmar- you do not take offence; I could not help making some experiments to see if that makes any sense. You do not have to accept any of it. First I cropped both sides to create a taller vertical dimension to make the kite look higher in the sky; added blue to the sky and water to reftect my memory of the blue sky and water in the middle-east, and blurred the edges to remove the white halo around the figure. Without any of these, the originial is powerful image   Posted: 04/07/2021 02:18:36
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Asmar Murad   Asmar Murad
Thank you. I liked the edit you made   Posted: 04/14/2021 04:53:34



Mark Southard   Mark Southard
The original tells quite a story but I must say the adjustments made by Kar are spot on !!   Posted: 04/10/2021 16:19:28



Marcus Miller   Marcus Miller
Nice image and a great story. I like the suggestions.   Posted: 04/19/2021 08:20:52



 

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