Janet DiMattia  

Growing Broccoli Sprouts  by Janet DiMattia

May 2020 - Growing Broccoli Sprouts

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This shot was taken of my newest project. My son sent me broccoli and mung bean seeds to grow my own sprouts. Very time consuming and a bit complicated. I really didn't need another project but am giving it a try. The sprouts should be ready to eat in a day or so. At least it gave me a new subject to photograph. Taken inside with D300s -1/60, f29, ISO 400 in camera flash and tripod.

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6 comments posted

Dick States   Dick States
I like the diagonal composition with the sprouts starting in the lower left corner and leading right up and into the container. I feel the narrow area of background on the right side draws my eye to that area becomes a distraction. Being the subject is the sprouts I don't think it's necessary to include all of the jar. I cropped some off the top and the right side then darkened the plaid cloth. What do you think of my changes?   Posted: 05/08/2020 21:03:54
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Salvador Atance   Salvador Atance
I think your edition has improved a lot the original shot that for me it was good one.   Posted: 05/18/2020 05:34:33

Janet DiMattia   Janet DiMattia
Hi, Dick.
Yes! - that definitely improved the overall appearance. I do like it very much.
Thanks, Janet   Posted: 05/09/2020 05:57:12

Zolt Levay   Zolt Levay
I like this, I can almost taste the sprouts (which I like but too lazy to do myself) and nicely composed and presented. I'd agree with Dick's comments, certainly strengthens to remove the bottom of the jar. I'm struggling a bit with the cloth backdrop; it's a great pattern and provides a nice complement of form and color, on the other hand it's a little busy and distracting.

What was the lighting? Seems a little flat and bright in the center.   Posted: 05/10/2020 09:08:11

Jean Armstrong   Jean Armstrong
Interesting subject. I like the color and crop that Dick did. It is a nice image of a common every day item. very imaginative. I need to spread my subjects.   Posted: 05/11/2020 16:47:26

Sandra Irwin   Sandra Irwin
A beautiful subject and composition! I appreciate the fact that the colors of the cloth are the same as those in the sprouts. I don't find the cloth itself distracting, but the fact it seems wavy rather than flat. I do like Dick's crop, but then he increased the light falling on the falling out sprouts, but the light doesn't light up all of those fallen out, which I find problematic. I like the lighting on the sprouts in the original better -- it's more natural and even and less distracting.   Posted: 05/13/2020 17:21:39