Stuart Ord  


Beeiness by Stuart Ord

August 2019 - Beeiness

About the Image(s)

I guess macro means many things, but pictures of ugly bugs don’t attract me at all. Having said that, they are very good subjects as the unassisted eye doesn’t see them well, it’s just that I’m not a fan of creepy crawlies.

I was much impressed by the Charles Needle webinar I referred to last month. I spent an hour snapping flowers in our garden, many of which were being visited by bees and the like (these are not too creepy crawlie in my view, and I’ve got to say I like honey bees as I have four hives, trying to do my bit for the world-wide pollination problem). Anyway, three things I picked up from Charles were:
Using a long focal length lens can be a good approach
Doing “shoot through” shots to put a blurry frame round the subject can be nice
A small depth of field can be good. Not what most macro that I’ve seen seems to aim for, but why not?

As a results I’ve got lots of pictures I’d love to share here, but alas I’ve got to choose one. So here it is, what I’d consider to be a pictorial macro, if there’s such a thing.

There were dozens of white tailed bumble bees on what might be (I’m no expert) a veronica. This has lots of upright shoots with purple flowers which die off from the bottom. The bees were having a feast, so dozens of pictures were taken. Good ones were fewer, but that’s the beauty of digital, the cost is close to zero.

So I’ve now got a new favourite macro lens! Even at 400mm (800mm full frame equivalent) I was getting interesting shots.

Olympus OMD-E-M1ii, Panasonic 100mm-400mm lens at 100mm, f4, ISO 800, 1/3200 sec. (I’d had too many blurred ones!) with a 16mm extension tube, CWA, -0.3 stop compensation. Processed in Affinity photo, I reduced the clarity (the opposite of what I usually do, it had little effect on the bee and the flowers it is on but softened the rest) of the raw file, before converting to Photo Persona where I cropped, dodged the bee a little and vignetted the corners a little, sharpened and noise reduced. Next time ISO 400 or 200 perhaps, I should be able to hand hold better!


This round’s discussion is now closed!
14 comments posted




Dick States   Dick States
(Group 65)
This is a great shot for this style of close-up photography. I very much like selective focus images and to my eye this is well done. Selective focus is not as easy as it might look. Like the colors and composition. The only thing I might change is cropping the right side off to remove the flower stock on the right. Nice image for sure.   Posted: 08/11/2019 20:42:09
Stuart Ord   Stuart Ord
(Groups 64 & 95)
Thanks, Dick.
Yes I did wonder about that crop as presently it is a second area of interest but I was chickening out of having so much out of focus if I did it. Charles Needle's photos are often more OOF than in focus, but I thought "walk before you run". If I just take off the right hand flower the bee becomes central, so here I've taken off a bit more to make it off centre again.   Posted: 08/12/2019 01:24:57
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Dick States   Dick States
(Group 65)
I'm not so sure now if I like it cropped or not. I just might like it better the way it was. See what others think. That's what this dialogue is all about.   Posted: 08/12/2019 07:16:30



 
Hi, Stuart.
I tried a tighter crop and off balance NIK Color Efex pro 4 vignette filter.
This moves the image's category from Nature to Open with the changes I made.
Maybe you can come up with another crop or post processing effect.   Posted: 08/12/2019 15:53:50
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Stuart Ord   Stuart Ord
(Groups 64 & 95)
Thanks, Janet. That's an interesting change. I think I should re-take the photo if that is the preferred crop as the number of pixels will be getting small! Alas the flowers and the bumblebees have gone now for this year. The thing I don't like about the closer crop is that the wing is blurred by the flower on the right. So I've been looking through the original photos to see if there's a better one for this treatment, and been disappointed by an large (despite having had hundreds of photos!). This one seems marginally better for your treatment. I usually just use the burn tool to vignette in Affinity as I find the inbuilt ones are a bit too symmetrical. It doesn't add grey but just burns the colour where I choose, ie the corners and sides, and is less obviously a vignette. As for nature to open, yes I suppose so, but I'm not a nature photographer in the sense that competitions specify, so it's no problem to me. Pictorial nature s better in my view!   Posted: 08/13/2019 01:36:18
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Stuart Ord   Stuart Ord
(Groups 64 & 95)
Or how about this. Here the flower was sharp with no foreground flower to give the shoot-through, but I blurred it with the smudge tool...   Posted: 08/13/2019 01:45:26
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Hi, Stuart.
I like the 2 versions you came up with. Don't delete all of you other images without giving them a close examination. I actually prefer pictorial nature nowadays. When I first got into nature photography the subtle informing nature story was well regarded. Now it seems that the most obvious or violent action is preferred. Trends come and go. It is a real challenge to get close enough to get the shot you want. Nature does not wait for you!
  Posted: 08/13/2019 05:33:07



 
Stuart,
I like very much the crop Janet made to your image, in case your subject was the bee. Your second and third bees were also beautiful.
I've found in Janet's crop version there is no distracting elements, the view can be fixed on the bee, exploring its work with the flower.
The third bee has an extra value because of we use to see bees from their back and this is a lateral view allowing to study head and legs.   Posted: 08/16/2019 06:15:30



 
I, too, felt the right stalk should be cropped out. I wouldn't center the bee precisely, by the way -- just a bit off center. I liked the blurring. The second and third bees are fantastic, as well. What a great set of shots--good work!   Posted: 08/18/2019 16:16:20



Tom Pickering   Tom Pickering
(Groups 0 & 53)
I actually love the dreamy effect you arrived at in your submission. While I agree with the right side being removed, I also agree with Sandra about the bee being off of center, hence this suggested crop:   Posted: 08/20/2019 17:44:09
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Stuart Ord   Stuart Ord
(Groups 64 & 95)
Yes, very nice. I'm always wary of cropping too hard if I see a print on the horizon as I'm "only" starting with 21 MPx, although no problem for a PDI of course. I was also reluctant to crop hard as the whole point was the blurred border, and I didn't want to lose that too much. However I think Tom has got a good compromise, there's enough of the foreground flower to give a nice effect. I might have included a tad more on both left and right, but that's splitting hairs.

What a difference a crop makes!

Thanks for all your comments, it's so interesting to see other people's views.

As a matter of interest, how are you (all) getting the image to modify and re-submit? When I do it, I take the enlarged picture (click the main picture or zoom in) then screen print with a tool (I use Lightshot), paste into Affinity as a new file, then do whatever I want to do, export and upload that file. Is there a better way to do it?   Posted: 08/21/2019 01:33:49



Dick States   Dick States
(Group 65)
I like this Tom, This is my pick of all the images.   Posted: 08/20/2019 19:47:36



 
Hi Stuart, one of the beautiful and attractive pictorial macro. Lovely!
I very much liked the cropped version from Dick while I also liked the full frame as posted by you.
One thing that caught my eye was the wider f stop to have shallow dof. it is superb and is giving a kind of feel to the viewer given the colors, blurriness.
I think SS of 1/1000 or 1/1600 would have still helped you to get a good sharp image which could have given you an edge to reduce ISO further. Overall, it is a fantastic image   Posted: 08/22/2019 03:20:40
Stuart Ord   Stuart Ord
(Groups 64 & 95)
Thanks, Madhusudhan, very kind comments. I like the blurry effect too. Seems to me that macro is all about DoF, but not necessarily to make it as large as possible. Shutter speed and iso - yes, I sometimes err to much on the safe side! Alas those flowers have now died and the bumblebees have gone elsewhere, so I need to look for another subject.   Posted: 08/22/2019 04:27:17