Erik Rosengren, FPSA, PPSA
About the Image(s)
How I did it—Last April, four friends and I ventured to Port Richey, Fl., about an hour North of Tampa, to a fishing village then rented a pontoon boat so we could photograph 9 old stilt houses out in the bay. These builds are part of old Florida and I understand it, can’t be re-built by law. My entry was the newest of the 9. Unfortunately it was leveled three months ago during our last storm. Several years ago, during my Club Presidency I gathered several volunteers to shoot many parts of the state. Then put together a PowerPoint presentation “A retrospective of old Florida” that I presented at the 2006 PSA Convention. Since that time a group of us continue to add more images to the pile so the CD can be updated in the near future. “ American Stilt House-Florida” was shot with my tools of the day, Canon 24-105 IS lens with polarizer, mounted on my Canon 5D Mark 111 body, shot off-hand. ISO 400 to compensate for boat movement, f11 for good depth of field and shutter speed of 1250th of a second to insure sharpness. The original has been retained, however I wanted to do something special with this image. Next stop, click the mouse key on P.S. then Camera Raw Filter, click on auto exposure that created a perfect exposure with no further work. On to Topaz Suite and several creative images looked at. Unfortunately I don’t remember the selection picked. Looking forward to your critiques.
This round’s discussion is now closed!
11 comments posted
I ended up taking your image into Topaz and did a little work on it and then did some work on the skies using the Camera Raw filter in Photoshop to give it some gradiation to see what I could do with the skies.
Interesting image nad I love hearing the story behind the photo! I still wonder how they get WI-FI :)   Posted: 10/09/2018 12:14:51
  Posted: 10/09/2018 15:04:55
In my humble opinion the image, while being somewhat unusual, lacks some punch. The colors appear muddy and need some contrast. The gray sky just sits there and does nothing. I might add a moon above the boater.
I'm sorry if I seem brutal but it lacks some artistic punch.
Congratulations on your honor of Fellow. It was my honor and privilege as a friend to propose you for that honor.   Posted: 10/09/2018 15:11:20
(Group 32)
It is strange how both you and David have chosen to produce images this month with similar blank skies. However, I feel I must agree to some extent with Bill that the image needs a bit more punch. A good boost to contrast using Curves would do all that is needed and make the colours really jump out. I like the composition with the boat adding some interest.   Posted: 10/17/2018 11:08:41
Firstly warmest congratulations on your well deserved FPSA .
Erik I am so sorry but this effect really does not work for me as already stated a boost in contrast may well make it pop,on the other hand I do so like the original and may I commend you on photographing Florida for posterity this is a valuable archive and important record of social history as you have already said this building is no more but at least there is a record of it.
  Posted: 10/17/2018 15:31:51