Punkaj Gupta  


Shelter by Punkaj Gupta

June 2018 - Shelter

About the Image(s)

A picture I took of a bridge in Suzhou, China. Have called the picture "Shelter".


This round’s discussion is now closed!
6 comments posted




Kieu-Hanh Vu   Kieu-Hanh Vu
The structure and design of the bridge are beautiful, and the composition works well. However, the white sky at mid-day draws the viewer's eyes there.   Posted: 06/18/2018 04:27:54



 
It would help if you posted your camera settings. The the nobs across the top of the bridge seem soft. I higher F stop would make them sharper. Mid-day is a hard shot. The sun on the underside of the bridge is jarring. A little darkening of the sunlight could help soften the image I believe.   Posted: 06/25/2018 11:34:50



Ruth Sprain   Ruth Sprain
I appreciate the details that you've captured in the bridge. The composition and angle of the shot work for me too. It's a shame that some of the detail in the clouds are lost with the bright sunlight.   Posted: 06/27/2018 12:46:28



 
I like the composition of this image. It has a great flow. I wonder if doing this image in HDR would help to bring out the detail in the sky and bridge and level out the lighting that seems so distracting.   Posted: 06/27/2018 12:57:42



 
The composition is good. Focus seems a little soft. The lines of the bridge are good and the position of the tower is good as well. I think the white clouds create negative space and just don't add enough interest in color or texture. Could you have reduced exposure in the sky and perhaps add clarity or some HDR brushing..?   Posted: 06/27/2018 21:03:42



Lisa Cirincione   Lisa Cirincione
(Group 85)
I like this image... I like the composition and the colors. I'm not put off by the daylight or the softness. I would like a person to be in the photo, to show why you called it Shelter. I think it could use a human element.   Posted: 06/27/2018 21:28:57