Sharon Moir
August 2019 - Orca Point Sunset
About the Image(s)
Inner passage in Alaska. No retouching done. Just liked the reddish light coming through the trees and person walking through it.
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7 comments posted
The sea does not appear to be level. The base of the walkway and the extension to the left has no definition. By lightening this you would create a pathway for the person to walk. Posted: 08/07/2019 10:26:17
Nice shot which could be helped by removing two concrete posts and straightening the horizon. The sun breaking through the branches adds some interest in what would otherwise be a totally black area. Posted: 08/10/2019 13:48:38
I straightened the horizon and cropped the foreground and background. You might eliminate the piling as it competes with the man. Posted: 08/11/2019 19:54:02
I like that. Thank you Posted: 08/13/2019 07:43:49
I am wondering if it would have been possible to move to the right so the tree would be positioned on the left with the sun and reflection on the right. I wouldn't mind seeing the figure walking between the two. Posted: 08/24/2019 23:02:24
If composition can be changed a little, it would be more nicer. I would like to put the person in the reddish light. Posted: 08/25/2019 10:21:33
This is pretty and has a good mood to it. I do like the tighter crop that David did. You still get the mood. Removing the central pillar might be good, but not crucial. Posted: 08/25/2019 15:05:52